Re: Mobile home agenda by Bachus	25-Aug-02/8:49 PM
also a hello to you fine lady..hope your well, and obeying your curfew...remember boys are bad by nature and bred liars, but so are girls...i must shower..i smell like a kelp bed that was picked up and hurled by a twenty foot shore breaker! fizzled...and to top it off i have to cut my hair for some prawne play DAMNIT I hate musicals...
Re: Work by poetandknowit	26-Aug-02/3:29 PM
that's fucking blue collar brilliance p&k, you get the Bacchian swagger of the week recipe here comes the love baby (Bachus's favorite soup) Kotosoupa Avgolemono: (Greek traditional Chicken and rice soup) What you need: 1 stewing chicken, 6 c.broth, 1 c. rice, 3 eggs, seperated, juice of one lemon(my favorite aspect, <stoner short cut add lemon juice to campel's chicken noodle w/rice>), salt & pepper to taste. Boil chicken until cooked. remove chicken and let cool. boil 6 cups of broth and add one cup of rice. add salt & p to taste. When rice is cooked, lower heat to simmer. put 3 egg whites in mixing bowl and beat until stiff. then add the yolks, then add juice of one lemon slowly; beating well. then add the yolks, then add juice of one lemon slowly; beating well. then add the broth, a littla at a time, beating well, until most of the broth is used. Pour this mixture back into pot, stirring well. Pieces of chicken may now be added to soup if desired. "That all-softening overpowering knell, the tocsin of the soul-the dinner bell." Lord Byron (enjoy the recipe friend, and the poem was great and bountiful, like this soup! 9/10! t
Re: Yesterday I cried by 1Sapphire1	26-Aug-02/3:52 PM
Now god's wife, ye know us bachians can fell that tree with one whack.what's this about editing, nay! only typos never structure! who? us? chew on your ankle, this piece suffers from tacky adjective syndrome, and unfunctionable noun disease, i say unfortunately, it is beyond medical-literal-visual recovery, and should be put down 4/10!
Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles	27-Aug-02/12:48 AM
yeah! bitch! "up your mouth"!???
Re: you're never alone by nentwined	27-Aug-02/12:51 AM
that's right. love the jibber jabber 9/10!
Re: you're never alone by nentwined	27-Aug-02/12:53 AM
that's right. love the jibber jabber 9/10!
Re: The boy who shot birds by Bachus	27-Aug-02/6:10 PM
Why? so the illiterate can stare at it and pick their asses and go...gee, "but it's so long and complicated". no thanks. i would much rather read the spittle of under sexed well read house wifes with divinity complexes...going like...wow! here child is your poetry lesson for the day...just for you...from a cultured bossom, lol!. the bottom line is..some are born to write, and others born to pretend..like dark angel for example, now he's one of these talented types with a hundred ways of expressing the creative medium, if not thousands, but you. what? always...feminine power pumping estrogen reeking girl to woman romps that stink of infatuating with what you can never be, 'as powerfull as daddy' bicep flex in the summer sun. now dark angel, he's talented and diverse, and goes to hip trendy hipper stiller trendier clubs like coven 13, and stigmata w/the likes of kino...and hallucinets...bravo god's wife, and you too da, you both fail, and i'll see you on judgement day when the great hoof in the sky decides it's time your beaks were squared....loose minded critics are a dime a dozen whether talking about father's balls and the need for balls of their own, or gay poo body rubbing, or mother, or gods, or whatever, but me and mine are onto the collaging of the past and the future of writing through more symbolically reranged sources, sorry you didn't get tapped for the 'think tank of tesla grovelers" like me.maybe next time. in a world that respects the real power of big cock propaganda, and doesn't dwell on trite things like, poo and daddy and mommies. you might get your big break!...you all make me eat boogers and fart on the dog. i hate you. all of you.....bastards...interlopers.
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Aug-02/6:14 PM
Another daddies cock poem, but wow this time it's a duh duh duh,dah.ufo, with shortwave radio powers. look out....anagram is a diaphram doo da doo da...fail.fail.fail.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Aug-02/4:08 PM
god! he's fucking everywhere! THE BATS MAN! THA BATS@!.......ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!! did youy see that?! over there next to the fiddely wack....ah..........he's ewverywhere...i swear it.EVERYWHERE! the poim? oh ah....11!e
Re: KAT 2 by nentwined	28-Aug-02/5:11 PM
mammon/ noun: material wealth having a debasing influence. 6/10
Re: "nos-f***ing-talgia": a crappy unrhymed sonnet by chicken	28-Aug-02/5:16 PM
indeed.groovy title and nice soup! 10
Re: Esplanade by Wulf	28-Aug-02/5:18 PM
this get the Bachus 'WHO STOLE MY ROCKET POWERED TOOTH BRUSH AWARD' enjoy. 10/10
Re: Uncertainty by nentwined	28-Aug-02/5:19 PM
god damn this things a fucking poltergeist...be gone foul djin i banish thee!!!!!!!!
Re: remember me by Katie	28-Aug-02/5:21 PM
dig the typos purpose, and false child banter! you pass! at what? deviled egging.19/10
Re: you're never alone by nentwined	28-Aug-02/5:28 PM
Malthusian.8/10!
Re: you're never alone by nentwined	28-Aug-02/5:59 PM
Malthusian.8/10!
Re: The Seasons, Changes by Frass	29-Aug-02/7:40 PM
if the avon lady stays any longer...we'll go broke..
Re: Billie's Threnody by Frass	29-Aug-02/7:51 PM
here frass shows us once again his amazing ability to hone it down...to...yes..yes...to sculpt..i'm awed...
Re: 22nd Anniversary by Frass	29-Aug-02/8:01 PM
this smells like another father of the bride sequal...this time...in.. norfolk..so positive and uplifting...awe...and it makes you think too...alot...lots of braincells are up there right now...in my huge mind just...wow..smelling flowers, and solutions..and i don't even remember what i was mad about...oh yes...here it comes...the joyful glee...la.la.la.laaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.LAaaaaa la. lo.la.lo. sing with me...follow the bouncing flower sniffer. you'll feel better trust me...smile children cuz things are just so perfect and special these days...yeah..i feel it alright...lots of spears shaking around here. i'm joylouse.
Re: Summer Son by Frass	29-Aug-02/8:15 PM
i just can't win this...you're to nice...fuck it...i give in to the lap dance...let theballs roll as the will. i give