Re: Fallen Leaves From a Tree by kristenk69lover	29-Aug-02/9:03 PM
another fine example of why michael jackson looks the way he does and touches little boys on their penises. their nice soft penises, remind me of a flying leaf that lands right 'pon my lap...i guess that 69 in your name makes you an expert on leaf navagations and love huh.....better leaf the poetry to those who write and dont BLOW! you blow....lol! and deep down inside too.....you fail..misserably. good luck.. have fun here...stay as long as you want, and write more.....please..i need the extra targets.i
Re: A Hard Lesson Learned by kristenk69lover	29-Aug-02/9:11 PM
god! this is to good to be true...you are priceless...d.a DAMNIT! quit fucking around dude...you're realy starting to worry me...pull your evil spirit out of this retarded girl. PLEASE!. for the love of jesu' just fucking stop it please...god..plea......make him stop doing that.f
Re: Incidentally, you might want to look up 'Amplexus' by Shin-Bojangles	29-Aug-02/9:57 PM
i give you full credit for the theme....i especially love all of your diverse and well rounded characters especially......keep up the go/od work. that ring things pretty hip too. quite moving. indeed.i
Re: A Hard Lesson Learned by kristenk69lover	29-Aug-02/9:59 PM
LOOK OUT fuck...timber...she's a leaner...run...RUUUUUUUUNNNNNN!!!!!! four!
Re: Uncertainty by nentwined	29-Aug-02/10:44 PM
has somebody not been getting enough attention lately? okay! somebody hug nentwined so we can go about our business cuz i'm getting fucking bombarded over here...i can only pray mine are doing that to him...fuck! check out me knew haiku series to mtv its riveting and full of bavarian creme!FUCK YEAH REVOLUTIONNNN REVOLT AGAINST THE MAN, THE BLACKS THE WHITES, THE SPICS.THE WOPS,THE POOS, THE JEWS, THE REDNECKS THE DIKES ha...everyone against everyone yes i hate myself most of al;l yeahhhhhhhhhhhh,,,fuck michael j, and limp peanuts and all of them ahhhhhhhhhhhhh. the vines are cool though. was he mad....he sucked.....what wever wappened to fuuckingMUSSSSIIIIIICCCCCC. fuck. fuck yu too. fuckers
Re: Prologue-Epilogue: A Self-Indulgent Peice of Tripe by Shin-Bojangles	29-Aug-02/10:45 PM
nice.thmmppppp.
Re: Fallen Leaves From a Tree by kristenk69lover	29-Aug-02/10:48 PM
venus don't be nieve! this is the dark one dressed in head gear...trust me...D.A! DAMNIT get out of the tart immediately...i rebuke you!!!!!o
Re: Cancer Haikus by poetandknowit	29-Aug-02/11:00 PM
so there's fifty altogether. cool, or huh sorry....fuck it....change #50 last line to / the phone stopped ringing/ or/ marajuana urge?u
Re: Award shows make my cock hard, but you don't by Bachus	30-Aug-02/11:37 AM
my momma said poetry is like a box of chocalates...you never know when a metal smith will stand to comprehend the shape of it all.......it is a heart felt stab at those fuckers shoving down our throats...fuck them i say...serve it back to them rocket powered dildoed<to vulcan.......to z>...hey z....i gotta go to an audition right now talk to you later...thanks for your words, and love...see you later...sweetness! neatness. folding for flavorless love...hold onto the tail and whip it........h_^
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Aug-02/2:56 PM
"falicitian" drop the one, As a felicitian she was writhing..... shortens the sentence..keeps the beat better, and maybe drop the "in", instantly makes it more appealing. lovely though...7/10.
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Aug-02/7:41 PM
well it did get a ten before a shadowed finger exposed the truth which is of course the truth cuz i of course am i liar, hence the foolish liars love letter. are you good at shell tricks too. i bet you are....Malthusian
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Aug-02/7:54 PM
hey z....my hood wink was hood winked damnit that bastards quick. i give him a 76/975! i hope he's grateful. i am grateful my nerves held out that long. wow. geez. it was scary...you know that twenty hour period between it's posting and now i'm glad it's over...now i know who to focus on! sometimes the shark forgets the fishing boat between it and the seals...i am neither of the three. pity
Re: Billy Bytack Forces His Children To Sell Jesus by horus8	30-Aug-02/7:57 PM
how sayeth the brethren? guilty.
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Aug-02/7:59 PM
dominus vobiscum my friend..love mother.
Re: you're never alone by nentwined	30-Aug-02/8:00 PM
fatti maschii parole femine!
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Aug-02/8:07 PM
off to see my friends band sugar bitch, and then go to a Getty party, by guys...thanks also>lenore for your kind words..we've been mailing political urgent to each senator by the minute...viruses attached. bsee you fine feathered cads later...i must ablute..caio bellas!
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Aug-02/8:14 PM
i'm going to be myself (jeremi) tonight and try damn hard not to stack trash on the corner or speak in sever metaphors....thank god i'm not fucking driving. lol! it's my last weekend with long hair! damn those suit bastards! revolt!.....yeah whatever...DRINK! or maybe just watch everyone and wonder what i ever found appealing in all of this to begin with? sex.lies.gutterheads.junk.enlightenment.hoodclose. silence.
regarding some deleted poem...	31-Aug-02/2:37 AM
it means "look down" see that. that's you're reflection in my 'hoof' wondering why you care....open your dictionaries and look it up, but rather you already know what it means don't you?!. here try this one...than translate it into a romantic language of your choosing.............field of citrus.frost.shrink.rot.harvestless? how about that taRT?o
Re: Billy Bytack Forces His Children To Sell Jesus by horus8	31-Aug-02/12:49 PM
Horus had me write a tribute to it called "Award show? make my cock hard." it pretty much sums it up. trust me spare your mind...i know it's fun to watch the integrity of our great culture being trampolined into oblivion, but fuck! it left me with a rash and having to sleep with a loaded gun....go to my latest selection..it pretty much hits the entire show in the nuts...oh and horus said thanks for the blood break down, now he's got another reason to go to colorado instead of snow boarding..the tastiest soup and wrestling Atalanta! b luv h luv v.
Re: Billy Bytack Forces His Children To Sell Jesus by horus8	31-Aug-02/1:54 PM
he happens to be breaking through the normal stances of writing and conveying certain thoughts..how about you? stick to your 'reading' of poetry open mic to a crowd of ten.. poetry that you have to memorize for dayd ahead of time if it's new the others you know by heart, but you NEVER CHANGE ANYTHING..it's the same old show, over and over and god forbid if you forget a line on stage cuz then we have to hear you appologize and try to go through the whole piece again, FUCK! why? because you can't improvise (it's so much sexier and creatively inspiring to fly by the seat of your pants)you never could and you never will, you need to go 'read' poetry with babbit in the woods, and keep teaching the young ones here the beauty of the ruby warbler, and let your little bros handle the improv madness..."one eyed croissant butterer/" a penis...duh..nevermind...you are getting slow in your old age...this is clearly four seperate pieces that work off of eachother in a very accessable manner...i..unlike you, have developed a 'new way' to edit, write, and mix my old with my new and collage it with anything i can grab, media, commercials whatever...what do you do, ah yes the same old same old....boring...way to push the envelope..here you preach about the spoken and written word as if you truly grasp the meaning behind god speaking life into us, yet you fail to deliver anything other than lusty little girl daddy praising drivel with a ufo inbetween...wow the majestic twelve..project blue bird, red cell, it's all the same.. and the truth is none of us here will or can do anything about it but go wow, she's cool..she knows...what? could you go up in front of an audience and speak proficiently about the topic in a three part series wrapping it up with a standing o at the end without memorizing your speach? no, some have to prepar...others are always prepared..lighten up to open up..their is no formula to great writing only the need to write, you once told me that...now what. you sand bag..whatever! and of course it's iconoclastic masturbation, that's the fucking title for christ's sake...the whole thing is about, religious symbolism and sex and love and the rituals involved with them...b-days, weddings...sunday school..etc...i'm realy worried about you! what have you been reading civil war poetry again in your bath tub...cuz wow your poetry these days are so risky..geez...red shoes flyingblah blah red birds dying blee blee...hidden agendas we have no connection to other then the grand fascade blah blah he fucks her blee blee where daddy go bla...i mean who in the fuck are you trying to impress yourself? here you praise the works of writers like rimbaud, joyce and so on.sexton they all developed a language and style that was their own...what have you developed, ah yes another red bird poem...babbits waiting in the woods,have fun...i'm off to discover new territories in writing, new layers to purge...see you under the spruce with babbit...i'll be the man on the moon....<brought to you by crowley's "the book of the law", have you got your nut today, and photo hack the quickest way to develop your memorys> lol!have fun with your originality.