Re: the toxic noise by fleshpedler	19-Aug-02/7:16 PM
n. not a chance! i wouldn't even want it to be.
Re: Why Me? by Tarquin De La Bog	19-Aug-02/7:30 PM
u know the more of these shit poems this bog fellow praises the stronger and stronger i get...keep going you lover and praiser of weak scripture..i'm having the time of my life reading your constant one brain cell powered banter, are you a jewish cantor? were you in the car with princess di when they headlined the pillar? cuz wow your fucking chiding pursed english sensibility is right up the alley of a merchant ivory film...the english patient part deux...another tiresome three hours with a burn victim in the desert..is just what this site needed..not that your even from england..cuz i'd bet money you're just the semen soaked left hand of some midwestern poemranking ten year old with a knack for creating false identities, and if by chance you are from the land of drizzle...then..even better, cuz with you breathing and stinking up the place...no wonder you people always say "god save the queen" save her from having to listen, and or read any of your short, bland, see through, mind de-expanding rhetoric lacking rhetoric...ode to the sea blah blee ree tee blah blah i'm deep blah blah..i'm from england land of literary geniuses..blah..blah the sea blee vlee....you americans..blah blah should learn from me blah blah...we beat your pathetic asses then...stole your colony..and evolved at a hundred times the rate of your so called country(cuz i don't even think this clown is even english) has in 1500 years..do the math..we are two hundred some odd years old, and ye are over a thousand yet..we americans have saved your asses economicaly, militarily, and stylistically more times than i care to count...stay there.. enjoy your short termed reading materials..you deserve it..and your welfare too. you fucking two versed parrot...ha! ----/10
Re: Dirty Pops by Tarquin De La Bog	19-Aug-02/7:31 PM
heres an encore presentation you fucking toadie... 20 most Recent comments Re: Why Me? by Tarquin De La Bog Bachus 19-Aug-02, 07:30 PM u know the more of these shit poems this bog fellow praises the stronger and stronger i get...keep going you lover and praiser of weak scripture..i'm having the time of my life reading your constant one brain cell powered banter, are you a jewish cantor? were you in the car with princess di when they headlined the pillar? cuz wow your fucking chiding pursed english sensibility is right up the alley of a merchant ivory film...the english patient part deux...another tiresome three hours with a burn victim in the desert..is just what this site needed..not that your even from england..cuz i'd bet money you're just the semen soaked left hand of some midwestern poemranking ten year old with a knack for creating false identities, and if by chance you are from the land of drizzle...then..even better, cuz with you breathing and stinking up the place...no wonder you people always say "god save the queen" save her from having to listen, and or read any of your short, bland, see through, mind de-expanding rhetoric lacking rhetoric...ode to the sea blah blee ree tee blah blah i'm deep blah blah..i'm from england land of literary geniuses..blah..blah the sea blee vlee....you americans..blah blah should learn from me blah blah...we beat your pathetic asses then...stole your colony..and evolved at a hundred times the rate of your so called country(cuz i don't even think this clown is even english) has in 1500 years..do the math..we are two hundred some odd years old, and ye are over a thousand yet..we americans have saved your asses economicaly, militarily, and stylistically more times than i care to count...stay there.. enjoy your short termed reading materials..you deserve it..and your welfare too. you fucking two versed parrot...ha! ----/10 ,
Re: The War by Tarquin De La Bog	19-Aug-02/7:39 PM
you no it's not even fun anymore, cuz you're writing is not even rankable..so..i wont even go there..cuz there's no there to go to you.
Re: The War by Tarquin De La Bog	19-Aug-02/7:40 PM
you no it's not even fun anymore, cuz you're writing is not even rankable..so..i wont even go there..cuz there's no there to go to you.
Re: Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit	19-Aug-02/7:48 PM
the thought of you, evergreen, putting this on your wall is to good to be true, yes do it, do it, cuz the irony is to much, read it again, this time guess who you are.lol!!!!!. p.s. your fucking pathos is incredible in 5 to ten years you will be the woman in this poem..you are too fucking much..yes..hang it..hang it next to your mothers picture of jesu...ha!lol all the way to huntsville..ha!
Re: Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit	19-Aug-02/8:11 PM
stanzas, iambic peters, line34, line35, what the fuck are you people talking about....this is a beautiful honest tragedy with the makings of the trojan war, and your like wow!"i like the second stanza" un fucking real. you wretchless lasses hold this close to your "structured" love of poetry, but in the end this is a winner, because of it's rotten stench of honesty and love torn madness, jesus christ you fucking broads are to much the irony is totally fucking killing me...it's like a bunch of fucking nazi's trying to tape back together everything they've destroyed whilest they mumble, "hey? why did we rape and burn and shit all over this again, oh yeah because we loved it that much" un fucking believable i'm goinna give it another ten just because it says the exact reverse of what you dripping cunts think...oh and what happened to mr. bogs figures that indecipherable cursived tampon string would retreat. once again p&k. i'm barely humbled, and yes you are a poet, writer whatever artist, aware man of mischief 10/10
Re: Posing A 'mission (A Haiku Triad) by gay	19-Aug-02/8:29 PM
figures...this is pseudo menudo- minus ,the goodlookin one (mexican 80's band with the 'livida loca' fag in it, or just cow gut's)
Re: The Ultimate~Creep goes to Mecca! by Bachus	20-Aug-02/12:33 PM
hey stubby123 the piece was inspired by the time i met your mother in a turkish opium den to help her glue her refreshments back on... you stick to your oxford dictionaried un imaginative teenage angst (inspired by deep shit like the time you didn't make the footbal team), and i'll concentrate on making sure that your generation never ever gets it....(my vexed message) cuz you're to busy shooting up your middleschools and whining about "your nation" like you fucking have a clue what it's like to leave your state let alone the country..you shoot the backyard bunnies for dinner, let the real men hunt...oh i was sorry to hear about you know who, on the down lo try a little antibiotics, the ass swelling should go down...thanks for the zero stubby..i have yet to even get through one, sorry, rather,half of one of your attempts at writing they're just su fucking stale, and saturated with puberty lessened inspiration, tell your old man i said, "good morning" way to bring them up right mr. stubby.ciao bello fellow..buenos diaz puta! oxy.spermicide.gym.soapbend.shower friend.
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Aug-02/2:07 AM
ha! like they even care who we are... hi! i'm marlon brando...."charlie..charlie..i coulda been a contender charlie?!" like they have a clue.....doesn't matter, it's worth it in the end trust me...i love your name by the way ......i was talking about it all night ...i wrote a short story 8 pgd. at the bar just concentrating on the drums,,,i got drunk and started piling trash again ....fuck em' i'm SO SICK OF FAT BED RIDDEN POETS UGLY COMPUTER RIDDEN programers who think cuz they know pascal they know writing, cuz it's come to the keyboaRDS and not the quill anymore, enjoy you frito grabbing swine cuz we're coming hard fast and thumb tacked to mother's doilies.....<string music comes in........commercial starts...announcer speaks monotone...brought to you by 'osmosis' the only way to lose weight fast....and....'goatdent' the way to smile mediterranean and stay tan......!
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Aug-02/2:15 AM
where you / sit and stab / "what we've might have been" (you island dwelling tart), but no..no..no...it must be "at what might be true" why! cuz it's so counter curve...jesu' christo'....i was so ready to vote high until the last line....go to horus8's "jesus was a necromancer top see how it's done in haiku for jewue! nah just kidding you until i'm no longer kidding but drowning you're pure breed persian kittens, necromance that prat!
Re: Sexxodus by Shin-Bojangles	21-Aug-02/3:27 PM
this is fucking caniving and dust bunnyriffic...i am lead piped in the shin...i am tooting on my fingers and picking the tastiest boogers that i've ever rolled in my sweaty palm...embalm...embalm....i am a wing-nut!, and you are a beard...yes yes yes...hey wait no..no..NO...daytrippers tending the goat's 'hoof' hadid, the arab goat herder's got that look in his eyes like he's been without a good romping as of late.... RUN!..... in all serious i could qoute lot's of great lines and paraphrase this masterpiece, but fuck it, let them enjoy it their own way...
Re: Untitled by ErgoErgun	21-Aug-02/3:31 PM
tar tar bar? i know zara! she's the one with three thumbs...well rounded beefy humor...enjoyably raw! 7/10!
Re: Secret, Admirer by <~>	21-Aug-02/3:44 PM
Ahhhh. yes, so much more to the point now...i get that feeling alot, alot, alot...yes night eyed critters in the boonies, vacant, sordid, canopied penelopes.... a bug zapper rocking back and fourth exploding the occasional moth might be nice...regardless this piece is moody and sneaky and looming! 8/10
Re: Date Rape Gang Bang by Bachus	22-Aug-02/2:49 PM
that's why i wrote the ultimat creep for you...do you cut gordian knots with your left sword hand or write...cuz i sir leap nude and eract arieling end o'er end sun tanned rippled muscles flex...then i give a quick pull at the base of me pereneum activating my kung~foo flickle prickle to truly severe the rope right..write? or pull pud prawne before ye gets bent tow'ds the enevitable scrotismal equinox, rest assured good sir...you will be blinding by the whitening nudity betwix'd me arse cheicks. fold.or.anny.annie?
Re: Various 7-Eleven hold ups... by Bachus	22-Aug-02/7:21 PM
never make fun of vishnu..he has more scrubbing arms than you. i am hindu and clean..i am hindu full of wine stink and cow love, but notice how i carry the magical aloofa, it's from the clean corner of my shower. yes i am the aloofa of revenge. hug your cows...hire a vegan. cleanliness is godliness dirty children of lust and sodomy i will dot all of your foreheads in the name of vishnu. thank me later..u
Re: aphelion by DespondentDotCom	22-Aug-02/8:10 PM
ah blue collar hell, and the grown up responsibility blues...let's see uhhh.. cut all of your sentences in half and stack again for a cleaner look and to speed up the progression, that's all. aphelion?
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Aug-02/8:15 PM
well vulcan, according to myth you're a hell of a blacksmith and but fucking ugly...i would be willing to bet that your face is actually quite splendid though (in person)...it's your poetry that should be buried, along with you if it pleases...you fail!
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Aug-02/8:23 PM
so what? i read the clan of the cave bear series too...does this mean i can mount you like a flat head...maybe drag you back to my cave by your hair and tongue the foreskin...steal your otterskin medicine bag and slingshot, and then mount you again like a loving brother should...you bore me. masturbate next time with a cheese grater it's hip right now in thirteen year old circles nationally...here's my number 1-800 big-shaft and www.hepatitis-c.com!
Re: A Choir Boy's Spoiliation.. by Bachus	23-Aug-02/12:08 AM
well i guess that depends on whether or not you swim naked at the ymca doesn't it? i mean honestly what do you think babbit?, have you ever smoked a fat cock..i mean really choked on the flesh of a thick pud....oh jesu'...it's salivating...who cares? you? tell me all about it...cry on my shoulder...i'm here for you...do you need to come out? i do..... prayers of jesu' "forgive my dirty enbrowning prawn". for running nude and imagining...i'm so pretentious..lordy...please...you haven't read enough of my work to vaguely comment, just because you're number? on the countdown doesn't mean you've broken into scotland yard man...chill! killian red saves lives and irish pub hounds...vegg and pray man...pray for cock!