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The War (Free verse) by Tarquin De La Bog
I crouch,
lithe, alert, waiting.
My supple limbs
are coiled, tense.
I am ready to flee, should that need to be.
I am aware of no sound,
Merely the pulse in the temples of my head.
Sweat pours from every pore, as
I know that
I am surrounded by my enemies.
Suddenly, a shot is fired.
I am away! Explosion of power!
I am running.
Desperately taking myself further from
That terrible sound.
It is all over. I won the race.
I acknowledge the cheers of my
adoring crowd.
The drug of relief flows through my craving veins.
I savour the warm flavour of victory.
Far away, a shot is fired.
My brother cannot get away!
He is falling.
One more desperate victim, where the battlefields ring out with
that terrible sound.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7552
Posted: August 14, 2002 2:27 AM PDT; Last modified: August 14, 2002 2:27 AM PDT
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