Falling...

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Aug 2002 · 2 comments

Falling... Feel the breeze... Oh life bizarre; Contorted, distorted, Yet now supported By cotton strands, And lonely, lovely hands, That may not know The strength they give. The seeds of hope are sown, And grow strength to live, To survive, ripe: Golden in this field of life. Gently first; Not one to scare; To break this net Would break more than hearts. Those hearts, already fractured, Cracked by insensitivity; Fragile, delicate, Are too afraid to be dropped. This heart has fallen, But has not reached the bottom, Yet...

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[n/a] god'swife 22-Aug-02/2:45 PM Reply

this takes a quantum leap into to the realm of saccharinity. 'Oh life bizarre'?... Oh poem bizarre! Keep it real for the peeps. Settle down a little and speak to us as if you were telling yourself something important about yourself. Good luck

[8] Bachus 23-Aug-02/12:37 AM Reply

beaytifull and cryptic...it's universal and forever...fell proud..i normally hate this shit...but you have waded through... overall it;s depeche~mode good 8/10