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Falling... (Free verse) by quantumenterprises

Falling... Feel the breeze... Oh life bizarre; Contorted, distorted, Yet now supported By cotton strands, And lonely, lovely hands, That may not know The strength they give. The seeds of hope are sown, And grow strength to live, To survive, ripe: Golden in this field of life. Gently first; Not one to scare; To break this net Would break more than hearts. Those hearts, already fractured, Cracked by insensitivity; Fragile, delicate, Are too afraid to be dropped. This heart has fallen, But has not reached the bottom, Yet...

god'swife 22-Aug-02/2:45 PM
this takes a quantum leap into to the realm of saccharinity. 'Oh life bizarre'?... Oh poem bizarre! Keep it real for the peeps. Settle down a little and speak to us as if you were telling yourself something important about yourself. Good luck




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