Re: Jockey by betty swallox	11-Nov-02/11:03 AM
fine.
Re: The silent moon by UAFANTHORPEY	11-Nov-02/11:16 AM
once the moon made me travel drunk in the wrong direction...i ran out of gas..kicked out both of my headlights..ripped my steering wheel and hood off.then bawled like a baby and blamed my parents for all of it still holding onto my steering wheel as a teddy bear for hours. fucking moon.
Re: i miss you by bxjay170	11-Nov-02/1:21 PM
wtching yo prposely mispll thangs becouse you'ree bored. bores me, and frankly...you should be keel hauled and sent to collect oysters for shillings.i've felt pigeon feed with more texture than this train wreck. have fun on the worst list it's inevitable.
Re: i miss you by bxjay170	11-Nov-02/1:25 PM
the word "holping" does seem to offer a bit of hope so can you holp me holp you holp yourself. you're fired. next.A
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Nov-02/2:25 PM
ha.!crikey! that's a toss. have an eight. for the title and conclusion.???
Re: echoes by brazen	11-Nov-02/3:31 PM
great last line, but second stanza last line "horizon" and or hori-zen which could be better, but since you don't have any other hyphens going on any where else it wouldn't look that good i guess...interesting notion though...just forget everything i said..i'm stoned and squandering my time unwisely again...has anyone seen a better manager or agent floating around here..i need a new one. bad.
Re: Goodbye by Nicholas Jones	11-Nov-02/3:45 PM
and the brethren say satasfactory. i don't care for you as a human being, because your not yet, but i will buy you a beer after work one day..so here. i enjoyed reading it on all the levels that count in the attic across the street from you...here i'll flash my light twice to proof it.2
Re: Sprinklers by KarmicTwiggy	13-Nov-02/11:30 PM
going to carolina in my mind. forever. 8.
Re: Chicago Detroit by w~* ATHENA *~w	14-Nov-02/12:20 AM
the more to follows... fucks it up...up until that. genius. 9.
Re: The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus	15-Nov-02/12:01 AM
i'm going to give you a nine on this...be proud..i normally tear the fuck out of everybody just out of sheer distemperment. why? hardcore denial my friend, and alot lot more...this made me care about life again on certain levels, and i choose to cover the girls name at the bottom, replace it with mine, and pretend it was a note to me from someone who held me along time ago....but no more is that...no more...is me. 9. boo-hoo. col! lol! col!dol!bol!wol!
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Nov-02/9:15 PM
do me a favor. give in.3.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Nov-02/9:18 PM
no wait...that's not silence...THAT'S A WALL OF RAW SEWAGE! DUCK! 2.
Re: hate by ts	17-Nov-02/9:21 PM
i hate you too. But with alot more fucking passion. bet money. word. 0. by the way. you need a puppy and a spanking.
Re: MY dear friend by jonny2000	17-Nov-02/9:24 PM
what? you think that since you put "from my mom" at the bottom it would bring relivence? you were sadly wrong. freak. 4.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Nov-02/9:27 PM
thought you'd never ask. saw you in harry potter yesterday. good show ol'chap. take a six and feed it to your parakeet.
Re: untitled by teacup	17-Nov-02/9:28 PM
if you were mascara..i'd be running too. boys don't dry. 3
Re: model kit by teacup	17-Nov-02/9:30 PM
this is a nice volley though. 8. come back with some gel tabs tomorrow, and i'll give you a shove with a nine...well an eight.
Re: my bed by teacup	17-Nov-02/9:31 PM
the last line ruined it for me, but i was almost there. sorry. 6.
Re: listen by daniella	17-Nov-02/9:33 PM
not your best, but reeking of something burning true.. under and beyond.7.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Nov-02/9:35 PM
you brother are a star. this is the funniest thing i've read in a spell. nOW BACK IN THE BOX WITH YOU! 10!