Re: Slow death by Blade	18-Nov-02/12:03 PM
are you totally retarded, or just in need of a friend? either or, i believe they're now both totally irrelevant. it pains me to have to say this but you are no longer worth my votes or my time. farewell.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Nov-02/12:16 PM
listen man..why in the fuck can't you just let this piece work from top to bottom as it should? it's really aggravating having to scroll around that much. can you dig? i'll wait to vote..if , and when you decide to straighten it up...i seriously doubt that you will..there are some intolerable typos also like "bird's siging" even singing could have been better. great content and idea revolutions though. cheers. ass.
Re: Boy I Know by Goose	18-Nov-02/1:20 PM
delightful. 8.
Re: Faith... by loneshadow29	18-Nov-02/1:37 PM
almost contemporary.
Re: The beauty of a bird by mozac	18-Nov-02/3:51 PM
the secret naming of things, and yes i have...you're dismissed.
Re: Bored by Goose	18-Nov-02/4:22 PM
Alas.. another fast car. have an 8.
Re: Poet's Rest by Brennan	18-Nov-02/4:29 PM
L10 should be "So seen my quill is set aside" otherwise a perfect lullabye.8.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Nov-02/4:30 PM
my random button is apparently broke. again.
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Nov-02/12:20 PM
many novels that you wrote in highschool huh? yeah.. have fun her at poemranker. your nothing...poem was indeed, just that..about as motivationally intriguing as a coffee house in idaho.
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Nov-02/12:24 PM
okay! you win, and then some.
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Nov-02/12:41 PM
struck me as a bit vague, but you walk that tight rope often enough to be comfortable there i suppose.
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Nov-02/12:44 PM
so do i...and i hope you can't live with yourself because we have this in common. 9.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Nov-02/10:12 AM
never before would i have thought. now that's all i do, funnilly enough..you don't. piss poor wouldn't click for me so i'm going to go with "the stink of sex ass" and call it.
Re: jane by roses are read	20-Nov-02/10:17 AM
so.
Re: Where Is Happiness by BUFFY0BSESSED	20-Nov-02/10:25 AM
happiness is you gaining another hundred pounds so not only will you not be able to see your penis, but your feet will be gone too.
Re: Now I Know by BUFFY0BSESSED	20-Nov-02/10:28 AM
i hate you. and your fat and ugly. enjoy your stay...we serve danishes at noon.
Re: Pantoum by Moss	20-Nov-02/12:10 PM
your first problem is the use of pink, your second was the winter thing. the third apparently was looking for your face in the sky, when it's really in your hand.t
Re: Orange Hills (Villanelle) by Moss	20-Nov-02/12:16 PM
i watched my gradfather die of parkinson's disease, and it was funnier than any sitcom on the air at the time..what is time? something that obviously scares the shit out of you...now we're even, because the thought of you teaching old people creative writing when you can barely grasp that notion let alone the meaning.. scares the piss out of me, but just for a second. nice orange hill.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Nov-02/12:19 PM
i would but there's a three inch hair growing off of your left nipple.
Re: Emptiness by Jagang	20-Nov-02/1:39 PM
you no that ride at carnivals called the zipper...i heard they've thrown their cars quite a few time over the years. pray for that. could you pass me thast churo? thanks.h