Re: Night-mare by INTRANSIT	20-Nov-02/8:04 PM
i once stole a mannequin.
Re: Just Die Already... by loneshadow29	21-Nov-02/12:33 PM
you first. you know how i feel about you, but i'm going to be a big boy for a minute a rate this with no bye-ass 0. lol! naw just kidding here's an eight...because the titles cool and it's all around well done like my eggs benidect and fresh squeezed orange juice..you know it's 85 degrees right now in sunny california..slice of papaya? anyone? 8. mayne add a question mark with an exlamation POINT! for overall stamina down the stretch aye.r
Re: the devil in you by ciantu	21-Nov-02/10:24 PM
Bastard is spelled this way BASS-TURD! and i prefer to be called James. thanks.
Re: Parking Lot by uncannydanny	21-Nov-02/10:35 PM
the material involved in this piece is definitely savory, but the ??? shit has to go danny..if you fix it i'll give you an eight just for the false teeth and wig jettison.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Nov-02/12:08 PM
GGGGGGGGGGGOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAALLLLLLLLLLLA! bebeto to romano, it's all over folks! brazil 3, the argentinines 2. (9.)l
Re: Metaphysical Haiku by Idaho	22-Nov-02/12:30 PM
this is exemplirary work to the tenth degree. 10.h
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Nov-02/1:37 PM
rowlings is weak, but you're not.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Nov-02/12:50 PM
something happens with the last four lines that causes me to almost dislike this powerfull piece. could i do a re-edit for you? if so let me know. it's a shame to see a good movie throw it for no reason in the third act. here's a 6.
Re: The North Wind by Ranger	25-Nov-02/12:53 PM
i've just seen all your cards.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Nov-02/1:00 PM
you're wrong...right now as we speak there are a bunch of kindred dick-weigh-ors reading the cobain journals saying geez...he liked jellied skin..so than shall -eye- it really is an over analyzed reference to amoeba and ancient oceans critters that we evolved from before the angels came and fucked neaNDERTHALLS! SO? take your jelly and spread it thin....i'm still not impressed, in fact i'm still half asleep. dullards.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Nov-02/2:09 PM
almost a rye for the catcher. poindexter.8.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Nov-02/2:14 PM
what? are your mirrors still on strike? remember what happened to "stubby" or was it "stumpy" in tremors? he died a horrible death. he exploded. here> have a ten! i think you deserve it.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Nov-02/2:18 PM
oddly charming. BUT NOT HAUNTING ENOUGH! just kidding. try the wheel of fifths.
Re: Maria's ways on how to deal with puberty! by little_angel_maria	25-Nov-02/5:19 PM
if you're left handed..why write with your right?.the problem with puberty? pre-sense of humor, and in all honesty teens go to the movies to finger bang third cousins and lower class man and then let their friends digit smell. in other words farting is not aloud stinky.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Nov-02/5:44 PM
if you think you're clue-ing someone in..the jokes on you.
Re: Irony by w~* ATHENA *~w	25-Nov-02/5:48 PM
"die-anetics" but volcanoes and lava are so symbolic. point. show them how you control the volcanic side of yourself and they'll buy your book, or die trying..have an eight cuz i haven't.
Re: Liar by Goose	25-Nov-02/6:04 PM
shhhhh. 9.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Nov-02/7:36 PM
so what? still gonna say you're seventeen, and insult my fucking intelligence. if so i will lose all respect for your abillity to write such impressive poetry for your generation, because this is not the poetry of your peers it looks like oil in water. i dare you to have a seventeen year old decipher the layers of this poem to you on a level of maturity that the poem represents...oil and water..you are a horrible liar.
Re: Cocky by Goose	25-Nov-02/7:40 PM
famous cock leos. sean penn, madonna, napoleon. bill clinton. but jesus christ-off was an sagittarius with almost..soon to be capricorn qualities.
Re: Maliced flame by T'ien	25-Nov-02/7:58 PM
was it reall neccesary to go with that name. it makes it completely impossible to take anything you write seriously or give a shit. that's why i don't.0.