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Free verse № 19899

Poet's Rest

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 Oct 2002 · 3 comments

So heard my soul its lonely call One cool November's windy night Where in my study I reside Holds but a weary candle's light And chiming once the hour past Elusive lies the day anew Untarnished slumber fills mine eyes While dreaming dreams as dreamers do Lay rested I in blissful sleep So seen my quill be set aside Yet raise it shall come early morn For lose it shall I not abide What hidden thoughts I still conceal May eyes forbidden never see Though leave your sight once cast away Within your mind forever be

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3 comments

[4] Blue Magpie 11-Oct-02/5:34 AM Reply
I meant dead poets, sorry about the typo.

[6] Tascobar 15-Nov-02/4:52 AM Reply
A pointless poeme, but a decent effort nevertheless. 6. An enjoyable use of 30 seconds.
[8] Bachus 18-Nov-02/4:29 PM Reply
L10 should be "So seen my quill is set aside" otherwise a perfect lullabye.8.