Re: I Speak of Expanses by anitawit	25-Apr-03/8:59 PM
good, but I would end losing the last line instead for another line of impeccably aloof metaphors.
Re: Stoner Rant#1-Mnkypo's razor by Crakyamuni	26-Apr-03/4:47 PM
Not if the artist has the address of the purchasers home. Then he could break in with his palette and paint mustaches everywhere.
Re: ~What do I do~ by ~Ashley Baby Girl~	26-Apr-03/4:51 PM
Well, first off, try not to write it down. Secondly, go to Cancun with the rest of your type and do a swan dive from the motel 6's roof into the banquet table's fruit salad. What do you do if a cantalope wedge gets stuck in your vagina? Start a new religion.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Apr-03/8:19 PM
You excepted the booze because subliminaly, the tv told you to. That, and in real life you're a 52 year old relapsing songwriter for Clint Black.
Re: 3am and six cups of coffee gets you nowhere by Blindproject217	26-Apr-03/8:30 PM
sepulchral, or sepulcher, but not what you have, because it's not a word. Other then that, there are about ten grammaric goof ups and a couple other typos, but it's the thought that counts.
Re: Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin	29-Apr-03/12:31 AM
HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!!!! what? You're kidding right? lol. I'll bring the greater and lesser key of Solomon just in case.
Re: Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin	29-Apr-03/12:34 AM
"On this day, I have found fear..." Ahbdul Alhazar 'the mad arab'. (from the Necronomicon)
Re: Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin	29-Apr-03/12:38 AM
Necronomicon Death, madness and Cthulu. Let's swallow some souls.
Re: moments lost in adversity by brazen	29-Apr-03/12:41 AM
You make me feel guilty, and I wash my hands a lot?
Re: Trichomanic Sexless Bitch by superskunky1	9-May-03/11:58 AM
On a serious level the poem is almost grate! Grateful for rathering to die of course. the last line and title take away from it.
Re: Sanctuary by Lolly	9-May-03/12:02 PM
I would change thin to thick, really. 9. (this was the best poem i've read in a bit, probably the last 30 congradulations)
Re: My final poem by lee's tommy	9-May-03/12:05 PM
Shit.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-May-03/12:12 PM
Oh yeah... Now that's addiction. Yesterday, I saw a pack of Setraline addicts destroying a neighbors bike basket and rose bush. The look in their eyes was terrifying almost even heart stopping, but then I realized I hadn't taken my methadone, and perhaps had been a bit quick to judge.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-May-03/12:15 PM
Specifically, unspecific, and better off for it.
Re: Cabin by the lake by psikosis	9-May-03/12:18 PM
Friday the thirteenth part whatever.
Re: Emoticon by psikosis	9-May-03/12:20 PM
Good Question! Horrible poem.
Re: 2 by psikosis	9-May-03/12:22 PM
Change tyme to thyme and brings to flings.
Re: Untitled by js560000	9-May-03/7:50 PM
Metallica, did it better and bolder.
Re: The Martyr (Without A Cause) by The Martyr	9-May-03/7:53 PM
For Palestine West Virginia's favoutite vagina Laci Peterson.
Re: My Dark Power by The Martyr	10-May-03/11:36 AM
That makes the two of us.