Re: I Speak of Expanses by anitawit |
25-Apr-03/8:59 PM |
good, but I would end losing the last line instead for another line of impeccably aloof metaphors.
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Re: Stoner Rant#1-Mnkypo's razor by Crakyamuni |
26-Apr-03/4:47 PM |
Not if the artist has the address of the purchasers home. Then he could break in with his palette and paint mustaches everywhere.
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Re: ~What do I do~ by ~Ashley Baby Girl~ |
26-Apr-03/4:51 PM |
Well, first off, try not to write it down.
Secondly, go to Cancun with the rest of your type and do a swan dive from the motel 6's roof into the banquet table's fruit salad. What do you do if a cantalope wedge gets stuck in your vagina? Start a new religion.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
26-Apr-03/8:19 PM |
You excepted the booze because subliminaly, the tv told you to. That, and in real life you're a 52 year old relapsing songwriter for Clint Black.
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Re: 3am and six cups of coffee gets you nowhere by Blindproject217 |
26-Apr-03/8:30 PM |
sepulchral, or sepulcher, but not what you have, because it's not a word. Other then that, there are about ten grammaric goof ups and a couple other typos, but it's the thought that counts.
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Re: Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin |
29-Apr-03/12:31 AM |
HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!!!! what? You're kidding right? lol. I'll bring the greater and lesser key of Solomon just in case.
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Re: Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin |
29-Apr-03/12:34 AM |
"On this day, I have found fear..." Ahbdul Alhazar 'the mad arab'. (from the Necronomicon)
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Re: Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin |
29-Apr-03/12:38 AM |
Necronomicon
Death, madness and Cthulu.
Let's swallow some souls.
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Re: moments lost in adversity by brazen |
29-Apr-03/12:41 AM |
You make me feel guilty, and I wash my hands a lot?
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Re: Trichomanic Sexless Bitch by superskunky1 |
9-May-03/11:58 AM |
On a serious level the poem is almost grate! Grateful for rathering to die of course. the last line and title take away from it.
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Re: Sanctuary by Lolly |
9-May-03/12:02 PM |
I would change thin to thick, really. 9. (this was the best poem i've read in a bit, probably the last 30 congradulations)
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Re: My final poem by lee's tommy |
9-May-03/12:05 PM |
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regarding some deleted poem... |
9-May-03/12:12 PM |
Oh yeah... Now that's addiction. Yesterday, I saw a pack of Setraline addicts destroying a neighbors bike basket and rose bush. The look in their eyes was terrifying almost even heart stopping, but then I realized I hadn't taken my methadone, and perhaps had been a bit quick to judge.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
9-May-03/12:15 PM |
Specifically, unspecific, and better off for it.
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Re: Cabin by the lake by psikosis |
9-May-03/12:18 PM |
Friday the thirteenth part whatever.
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Re: Emoticon by psikosis |
9-May-03/12:20 PM |
Good Question! Horrible poem.
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Re: 2 by psikosis |
9-May-03/12:22 PM |
Change tyme to thyme and brings to flings.
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Re: Untitled by js560000 |
9-May-03/7:50 PM |
Metallica, did it better and bolder.
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Re: The Martyr (Without A Cause) by The Martyr |
9-May-03/7:53 PM |
For Palestine West Virginia's favoutite vagina Laci Peterson.
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Re: My Dark Power by The Martyr |
10-May-03/11:36 AM |
That makes the two of us.
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