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~What do I do~ (Free verse) by ~Ashley Baby Girl~ ~What Do I Do~
What do I do when I loose someone that I care about a lot.
What do I do when everything in my life is falling apart. What do I do
when it seam's like everything in my life is not worth living for. What
do I do when everyone look's at me and putt's a label on me that isn't
even true. What do I do when I am about to loose the love of my life.
What do I do when my Mom might die. What do I do when my life is pulling
me in two different direction's. What do I do when I feel like I have to
make up something to get attention from my family and friend's. What do
I do when everything in my life is making me feel like killing myself.
What do I do when everyone is pushing me away from them. What do I do
when I just feel like I am not spotted to live anymore. What do I do
when I fall in love with someone and they don't even care about me at
all. What do I do when my family looks down on me. What do I do when no
one cares about me anymore. What do I do when I am looking at a knife
and questioning to myself what if i was to kill myself, What would my
family, and friend say or do if I was to go threw with these thoughts'.
What do I do if I don't wake up in the morning and I die.
~What Do I Do~
Written by Ashley Nicole Shrider
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Posted: April 26, 2003 3:22 PM PDT; Last modified: April 26, 2003 3:22 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.2682066 Overall Rank: 3914 Comments:
Heres what you do. Stop writing simple thoughts. Look deeper into whats going on in your life. Listen to what people say and try and figure out why they said it, how they said it, if they lied. Just one sentence from someone can give me enough ammunition to write a whole poem. Dont make the same mistake i did when I first started writing, thinking that putting your thoughts and emotions on paper without any pilot or any direction is poetry, its not. Its called writing your meaningless emotions on paper. Some more advice, learn some vocab. But if you really love writing and you think you can be good at poetry then do not give up, listen to what people say. Theyr are some really good poets on this site, horus8, godswife, Mr.pig, billzbub. If you write somthing worthy of actually reading than they will tell you. -0-
We all die. That's what you do. but for now. stay living and write more.
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Secondly, go to Cancun with the rest of your type and do a swan dive from the motel 6's roof into the banquet table's fruit salad. What do you do if a cantalope wedge gets stuck in your vagina? Start a new religion.