| Re: On getting back by horus8 |
9-Sep-03/3:34 PM |
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I think you may have neglected to arrange all of your lines into the corrcet order. Be more careful next time.
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| Re: sick love by Nirvana13666 |
9-Sep-03/3:31 PM |
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I was hoping this poem was going to be about intimacy involving regurgitation. I was sadly disapointed. I pox be on you!
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| Re: a comment on F.R.O.G. by Garrett S Sexton |
9-Sep-03/3:24 PM |
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Except, on reflection, this poem must be a joke. I change my vote to a 10.
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| Re: F.R.O.G. by Garrett S Sexton |
9-Sep-03/3:20 PM |
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Why is this site infested with so many religeous zealots? If anyone here is thinking of becoming a religeous zealot, please take this advice: read the Bible. Not just selected passages, the whole thing. Honestly, it's completely fucked up. See the verses I posted on "Jesus Speaks to Poemrankers" by Joe-Joe. I can't even give this poem the dignity of a zero. -1-
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| Re: I Usually Wear Pants by razorgrin |
9-Sep-03/3:06 PM |
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I take it by "pants" you mean trousers? Are you not acquainted with proper English? Nonetheless, a most arousing haiku.
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| Re: a comment on Where are my Spectacles? by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
9-Sep-03/6:07 AM |
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That would be a cheese storeroom.
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| Re: Something Lost, Something Gained by Irischer Junge |
8-Sep-03/3:04 PM |
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| Re: Help The Aged by Mr Pig |
8-Sep-03/2:54 PM |
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I, my secret identity being Methusela, am 969 years old, and as such I enjoyed this poem greatly. I give you 10 for "he loads his fork gingerly" alone.
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| Re: (untitled) by http://bandgeek |
8-Sep-03/7:16 AM |
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| Re: a comment on A Lovely Surprise by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
8-Sep-03/7:12 AM |
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Why thank you. It's refreshing to learn that my genius is appreciated.
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| Re: The empty room by INTRANSIT |
8-Sep-03/6:35 AM |
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Jesus is omniscient, and therefore would have to know the answer to the question "Jesus? what is wrong?". The logical inconsistency makes it hard to believe this is actually Jesus. Is it supposed to be a Jesus impersonator or imposter of some sort?
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| Re: a comment on Babelfish Poetry (III): Segen (Deutsch) by Geschäftsreise |
8-Sep-03/5:31 AM |
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Nein, sie hat eine gepachtshliessfacher.
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| Re: (Untitled) by LuckyJoe |
7-Sep-03/2:58 PM |
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Congratulations! It's not often one encounters such a generous expendature of voracity in poetry nowadays. The introspective rythm is simply sublime. Keep up the good work!!!
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| Re: :) by Moniquesuvee |
7-Sep-03/2:29 PM |
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How dare you soil my name with this filth!
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| Re: a comment on A Lovely Surprise by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
7-Sep-03/2:26 PM |
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Have you ever thought that Freud's work has been largly discredited and is only quoted by uninformed, pseudo-intellectual cretins.
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| Re: a comment on Vest by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
7-Sep-03/2:22 PM |
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What are you talking about???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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| Re: My Id and I by William Delacroix |
7-Sep-03/2:15 PM |
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Sex is naughty. Do not mention it again.
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| Re: Babelfish Poetry (III): Segen (Deutsch) by Geschäftsreise |
7-Sep-03/2:08 PM |
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Deine muttie hat eine saftsack.
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| Re: a comment on Where are my Spectacles? by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
7-Sep-03/4:18 AM |
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A cheesemonger would only sell cheese, wheras a cheesesmith would make it. Also, the cheesemonger would conduct his business from a shop, and therefore have no need for a cheese shed.
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| Re: Concieted Checkmate. by LuckyJoe |
5-Sep-03/4:17 PM |
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Perhaps this poem could be improved if it was set in space.
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