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sick love (Free verse) by Nirvana13666
Inspiration in human form
I am infatuated with your touch
I am obsessive
I have become compulsive, neurotic
I would kill on your command
I worship your god like ways
You have cultivated mass emotions
These foreign feelings devour me alive
Speak so I can understand the unexplainable
Your words pierce through the clouds of confusion
I want to be the reason you smile
The last person you see
I wish I was the first person you ever saw
Your eyes tell stories
Your presence is overwhelming needed
I am in need of your attention
And I would do anything to always have it
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.1666665
Weighted score: 5.0448236
Overall Rank: 6991
Posted: September 9, 2003 1:23 PM PDT; Last modified: September 9, 2003 1:23 PM PDT
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