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Free verse № 64454

sick love

Member since 2003 · Posted 9 Sep 2003 · 2 comments

Inspiration in human form I am infatuated with your touch I am obsessive I have become compulsive, neurotic I would kill on your command I worship your god like ways You have cultivated mass emotions These foreign feelings devour me alive Speak so I can understand the unexplainable Your words pierce through the clouds of confusion I want to be the reason you smile The last person you see I wish I was the first person you ever saw Your eyes tell stories Your presence is overwhelming needed I am in need of your attention And I would do anything to always have it

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[7] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 9-Sep-03/3:31 PM Reply
I was hoping this poem was going to be about intimacy involving regurgitation. I was sadly disapointed. I pox be on you!
[7] http://mulberryfairy 9-Sep-03/6:04 PM Reply
Yikes. Hope this is fiction!