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A Lovely Surprise (Sonnet) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? Young James frolicked gaily about the house,
For the calendar, being of the most accurate variety, did read,
December 24th,
Indeed, 'twas of Christ's mass the eve!
And at last came that holy morn,
Whence rosy cheeked James did open his parcel; for the cold he cared not
a bean,
But Ho! what's this?
A crisply laid stool in that paper enveloped was seen.
Oh, Mother! James pleaded tearfully,
Why can't I have nice things like the other children?
You ungrateful wretch, she replied,
To the basemant for you and no daylight 'til years you have ten!
Up the ladder:
The Bloody War Of Angels
Down the ladder:
Severe Acute Respiratory Syndrome
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.130435
Posted: September 1, 2003 4:18 PM PDT; Last modified: September 1, 2003 4:18 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.1101027 Overall Rank: 1125 Comments:
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Shardik @ 24.126.113.154
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1-Sep-03/5:37 PM
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Indeed
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?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 195.92.67.69
> Shardik
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4-Sep-03/1:11 AM
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That's not an opinion.
Unpleasant. Have you ever thought that you are stuck in what Freud described as the anal-fixation stage?
Have you ever thought that Freud's work has been largly discredited and is only quoted by uninformed, pseudo-intellectual cretins.
Yes. But it worked for Lacan.
I love the "crisply laid stool" part. They don't make toys like they used to!
Why thank you. It's refreshing to learn that my genius is appreciated.
I'm not much of one to judge sonnets.. but it was interesting... I liked it. Paints the story quite clearly.
I must confess Sir, I do not even know what a sonnet is!!!
Crap! Utter Crap! 10
interesting
well worth the 9
i feel sorry for your childhood trauma it´s time you come out of the closet.
I would if it weren't for the shackles. Not metaphorical shackles you understand; actual shackles.
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