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17-Sep-03/9:00 AM |
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So why does this poem have loads of lines all offset? (I asked <~> the same question and was given, I think, a reasonable reply, but I can't see the reason here.) Are you trying to express yourself through use of the spacebar? Justify yourself now.
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| Re: reflexion - dayspring to dusk by DreamerSupreme |
17-Sep-03/9:08 AM |
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I really enjoyed reading this poem!!!
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| Re: You Say by hotwire |
18-Sep-03/7:33 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
18-Sep-03/8:04 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
18-Sep-03/9:13 AM |
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Do you enjoy sex? Why not join the sex club?
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| Re: At First sight by Nirvana13666 |
18-Sep-03/9:15 AM |
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| Re: A Haiku Haiku by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
18-Sep-03/2:45 PM |
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Additional credits: -=Dark_Angel=-
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| Re: Being Called Dave by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
18-Sep-03/3:26 PM |
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This poem is semi-autobiographical.
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| Re: Lucky Joe Finds a Ring by DreamerSupreme |
18-Sep-03/5:39 PM |
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Both charming and fragrant. A triumph! -6-
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18-Sep-03/5:40 PM |
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Oh, what it is to be loved!
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| Re: Before The Sun by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
18-Sep-03/5:42 PM |
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Perpendicular without being farcical. A beautiful compromise. -8-
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| Re: KANGAROO WITH A DIDGERIDOO by Garrett S Sexton |
18-Sep-03/5:45 PM |
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A kangaroo with a didgeridoo? Just imagine that! Whatever next!?
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| Re: Boys with Guns by Hostileintent |
19-Sep-03/7:14 AM |
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No. Where can I find such pictures?
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19-Sep-03/7:44 AM |
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I think it's very brave of you to post such an honest self-analysis. -9-
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| Re: Unemployment Lining by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
19-Sep-03/7:50 AM |
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I expect you fashioned all of your own belongings from a collection of sticks and wheat.
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| Re: The words of touch by TheVoiceless |
19-Sep-03/4:29 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Sep-03/4:49 PM |
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Suggested title: "Rubbish poem ahoy!"
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| Re: The Shu & Horus & Planet X by Shardik |
19-Sep-03/4:56 PM |
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Wow, that's true actually. -10-. Did you mean in a literal sense, i.e God impregnated Mary withour her consent, or just in some sort of crappy metaphorical sense.
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| Re: MicroPoem by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
19-Sep-03/5:13 PM |
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The idea behind this poem was to condense all my feelings into a single word, and thus create a poem which has the maximum possible concentration of emotion.
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| Re: I hate your guts and think you're stupid by horus8 |
20-Sep-03/4:07 PM |
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