Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

You Say (Lyric) by hotwire
Bily Foster You say you'll help me out but you sleep all day You say you'll stand by me but that just what you say When I tried to work you say I hide away You say you'll help yet I still pay You say you pay the rent You say you pay the bills You say you bought the food Yet I'm starvin' still You say I make excused If I don't succeed Yet I work so hard and you just don't see If you don't do what you say You have your reasons In reality it just depends on the season You say you pay the rent You say you pay the bills You say you bought the food Yet I'm starvin' still You say your not perfect Neither am I You say you'll support me At this point, I'd rather die You say so much Yet you do so little What will you do to solve this riddle Are you going to go on blaming everyone else Lord knows you won't blame yourself You say you pay the rent You say you pay the bills You say you bought the food Yet I'm starvin' still You say you love you'll go the extra mile But sticking around it ain't your style

Up the ladder: Lizzie Boredom
Down the ladder: A Solitaire Rose

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 00
.. 01
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10

Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.9403987
Overall Rank: 9061
Posted: September 18, 2003 7:04 AM PDT; Last modified: September 18, 2003 7:04 AM PDT
View voting details
Comments:
[3] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 195.92.67.68 | 18-Sep-03/7:33 AM | Reply
Hard-hitting.
116 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001