poemranker ::20 most recent comments by William Delacroix and replies

Comments byWilliam Delacroix, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Beautiful Scars by William Delacroix 13 Oct 2003, 7:32 AM
Fesseってゆう言葉はフランス語で「尻」の意味だよ。
on elton is inside my left shoe by w~* ATHENA *~w 5 Oct 2003, 6:35 AM
The h in haiku is not silent, so it would a "a haiku." How am I supposed to know who Aida is?
on Making Love by LucidRevelation 1 Oct 2003, 2:42 AM
More bodily fluids, please.
replying on My Name Is Blood by William Delacroix 25 Sep 2003, 5:26 AM
actually i just put a hyphen in there so the timing would be right for the last line, but i'm glad you found another way of interpreting it.
on Catalyst by Indigo 20 Sep 2003, 7:16 PM
Sex is neat. 10/10
on Pain in Death by Freethinker1602 17 Sep 2003, 7:07 AM
I love pain. 9/10.
replying on The Killing Festival Anthem by William Delacroix 16 Sep 2003, 9:19 AM
Would it happen to be a lovely Connectycuttian by the name of zed oops I mean zee?

Actually I think the NFG site is great. I shot an email sometime last week saying how much I loved it. (Rather than repeat everything here I'll see if z still has it and ask her to forward you a copy.) I'm on there almost every day subbing poems because z's rejection letters make my pants so damn tight.
on After seven days in the sun by <~> 15 Sep 2003, 7:52 PM
A corpse, a coyote, and the craftiest rhyming of the word 'dead' I've heard since that night I bought an undead poet a drink. Maaaaaaaaarvelous, my dear. I'd give it a sixty-nine out of ten if I could, but instead I'll just go as high as I can and throw in my pants.
replying on The Killing Festival Anthem by William Delacroix 15 Sep 2003, 7:39 PM
Hey...aren't you an Editor for NFG? I recognise your user name.
on Amongst by jsab78 15 Sep 2003, 5:55 AM
I'm not sure exactly what this poem is about, or maybe it's about a whole bunch of things all at once, but there were some cool lines toward the end, so I give it a nine.
on Mourning Glory by William Delacroix 12 Sep 2003, 6:34 AM
Geez, you guys are supposed to be aspiring poets here. Has nobody heard of a glosa before? It starts with a quatrain, right, from another author. Of course you credit the person who wrote it. Then there are four ten-line stanzas, the last line of each referring back to the lines of the original quatrain in the order they appear. And there is no silent e at the end of poem.
on Seduce Like Zeus by EAger to Offend 10 Sep 2003, 6:29 AM
I want to seduce Zeus's swan.
on Small Place by crwncka1 10 Sep 2003, 6:23 AM
this poem absolutely blew me away. i'd give it a 666, but the highest i can go is a single digit.
replying on pErFeCt pAiN by William Delacroix 8 Sep 2003, 6:34 AM
It's Japanese: "Blood washes tears away."
Can't say I've read the article, but I think Bach goes well with violence, since he's so unpredictable; he'll be all calm and serene one moment, then get carried away like a maniac. I wonder if he was bipolar.
PS: I like the name.
on Slimshady Meets Cali Hillbilly (I Don An Afro) by SupremeDreamer 4 Sep 2003, 10:48 PM
At least some parts of it made sense...I think.
replying on Nitemareweaver by William Delacroix 3 Sep 2003, 9:31 AM
...Did you notice it was an acrostic?
All this talk about God is making me want to burn a crucifix or a church or something.
Billy D.
on Provacation by J.B. Manning 3 Sep 2003, 9:26 AM
So I'm not the only one who thinks about ejaculation and masturbation and sex with androids (oops, that one slipped out), and is not afraid to admit it. I give it an 8 for its ample supply of rhymes.
on Sonnet for a Suicide by <~> 2 Sep 2003, 8:58 AM
This poem was so good it made me lose my pants. Where are they? Oh, there they are, around my ankles. Silly me. 10/10.
on great caesar's ghost by bondjedi 2 Sep 2003, 7:13 AM
i give it a 3 just because i hate the word bitch so much.
on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined 2 Sep 2003, 7:11 AM
Who says 'tis? The concepts are good, but it's a little too eighteenth-century for me. 8/10.