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2-Sep-03/7:12 AM |
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Nice imagery. It wasn't me that killed the old man, I swear. 9/10.
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| Re: great caesar's ghost by bondjedi |
2-Sep-03/7:13 AM |
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i give it a 3 just because i hate the word bitch so much.
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| Re: Sonnet for a Suicide by <~> |
2-Sep-03/8:58 AM |
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This poem was so good it made me lose my pants. Where are they? Oh, there they are, around my ankles. Silly me. 10/10.
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| Re: Provacation by J.B. Manning |
3-Sep-03/9:26 AM |
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So I'm not the only one who thinks about ejaculation and masturbation and sex with androids (oops, that one slipped out), and is not afraid to admit it. I give it an 8 for its ample supply of rhymes.
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4-Sep-03/6:42 AM |
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Some nice imagery, but I prefer the direct, explicit approach rather than the metaphorical one.
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| Re: Slimshady Meets Cali Hillbilly (I Don An Afro) by SupremeDreamer |
4-Sep-03/10:48 PM |
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At least some parts of it made sense...I think.
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7-Sep-03/6:13 AM |
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Yeah, that is pretty useless. But I've never seen the idea before, so if you made it shorter, funnier, and gave it a clever title, it might be worth something.
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7-Sep-03/6:20 AM |
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That is a pretty damn tiny poem; I had to bust out the magnifying glass and everything. Now is it "Stick the conditioner bottle in my ass" or "Lick the vein protruding from my penis"? 9/10.
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8-Sep-03/6:15 AM |
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I'm guessing there's a story behind this poem. Care to share it?
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8-Sep-03/6:38 AM |
River of beer?
Rain paint?
Other than those two lines it was a cool poem. But is it an ode to flailing and fucking or ellipses?
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| Re: Small Place by crwncka1 |
10-Sep-03/6:23 AM |
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this poem absolutely blew me away. i'd give it a 666, but the highest i can go is a single digit.
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| Re: Seduce Like Zeus by EAger to Offend |
10-Sep-03/6:29 AM |
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I want to seduce Zeus's swan.
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| Re: Mourning Glory by William Delacroix |
12-Sep-03/6:34 AM |
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Geez, you guys are supposed to be aspiring poets here. Has nobody heard of a glosa before? It starts with a quatrain, right, from another author. Of course you credit the person who wrote it. Then there are four ten-line stanzas, the last line of each referring back to the lines of the original quatrain in the order they appear. And there is no silent e at the end of poem.
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| Re: Amongst by jsab78 |
15-Sep-03/5:55 AM |
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I'm not sure exactly what this poem is about, or maybe it's about a whole bunch of things all at once, but there were some cool lines toward the end, so I give it a nine.
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| Re: After seven days in the sun by <~> |
15-Sep-03/7:52 PM |
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A corpse, a coyote, and the craftiest rhyming of the word 'dead' I've heard since that night I bought an undead poet a drink. Maaaaaaaaarvelous, my dear. I'd give it a sixty-nine out of ten if I could, but instead I'll just go as high as I can and throw in my pants.
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16-Sep-03/4:34 PM |
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Does your name rhyme with Janus or anus?
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| Re: Pain in Death by Freethinker1602 |
17-Sep-03/7:07 AM |
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| Re: Catalyst by Indigo |
20-Sep-03/7:16 PM |
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| Re: Making Love by LucidRevelation |
1-Oct-03/2:42 AM |
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More bodily fluids, please.
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| Re: elton is inside my left shoe by w~* ATHENA *~w |
5-Oct-03/6:35 AM |
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The h in haiku is not silent, so it would a "a haiku." How am I supposed to know who Aida is?
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