Re: a comment on Beautiful Scars by William Delacroix	13-Oct-03/7:32 AM
Fesseってゆう言葉はフランス語で「尻」の意味だよ。
Re: elton is inside my left shoe by w~* ATHENA *~w	5-Oct-03/6:35 AM
The h in haiku is not silent, so it would a "a haiku." How am I supposed to know who Aida is?
Re: Making Love by LucidRevelation	1-Oct-03/2:42 AM
More bodily fluids, please.
Re: a comment on My Name Is Blood by William Delacroix	25-Sep-03/5:26 AM
actually i just put a hyphen in there so the timing would be right for the last line, but i'm glad you found another way of interpreting it.
Re: Catalyst by Indigo	20-Sep-03/7:16 PM
Sex is neat. 10/10
Re: Pain in Death by Freethinker1602	17-Sep-03/7:07 AM
I love pain. 9/10.
Re: a comment on The Killing Festival Anthem by William Delacroix	16-Sep-03/9:19 AM
Would it happen to be a lovely Connectycuttian by the name of zed oops I mean zee? Actually I think the NFG site is great. I shot an email sometime last week saying how much I loved it. (Rather than repeat everything here I'll see if z still has it and ask her to forward you a copy.) I'm on there almost every day subbing poems because z's rejection letters make my pants so damn tight.
Re: After seven days in the sun by <~>	15-Sep-03/7:52 PM
A corpse, a coyote, and the craftiest rhyming of the word 'dead' I've heard since that night I bought an undead poet a drink. Maaaaaaaaarvelous, my dear. I'd give it a sixty-nine out of ten if I could, but instead I'll just go as high as I can and throw in my pants.
Re: a comment on The Killing Festival Anthem by William Delacroix	15-Sep-03/7:39 PM
Hey...aren't you an Editor for NFG? I recognise your user name.
Re: Amongst by jsab78	15-Sep-03/5:55 AM
I'm not sure exactly what this poem is about, or maybe it's about a whole bunch of things all at once, but there were some cool lines toward the end, so I give it a nine.
Re: Mourning Glory by William Delacroix	12-Sep-03/6:34 AM
Geez, you guys are supposed to be aspiring poets here. Has nobody heard of a glosa before? It starts with a quatrain, right, from another author. Of course you credit the person who wrote it. Then there are four ten-line stanzas, the last line of each referring back to the lines of the original quatrain in the order they appear. And there is no silent e at the end of poem.
Re: Seduce Like Zeus by EAger to Offend	10-Sep-03/6:29 AM
I want to seduce Zeus's swan.
Re: Small Place by crwncka1	10-Sep-03/6:23 AM
this poem absolutely blew me away. i'd give it a 666, but the highest i can go is a single digit.
Re: a comment on pErFeCt pAiN by William Delacroix	8-Sep-03/6:34 AM
It's Japanese: "Blood washes tears away." Can't say I've read the article, but I think Bach goes well with violence, since he's so unpredictable; he'll be all calm and serene one moment, then get carried away like a maniac. I wonder if he was bipolar. PS: I like the name.
Re: Slimshady Meets Cali Hillbilly (I Don An Afro) by SupremeDreamer	4-Sep-03/10:48 PM
At least some parts of it made sense...I think.
Re: a comment on Nitemareweaver by William Delacroix	3-Sep-03/9:31 AM
...Did you notice it was an acrostic? All this talk about God is making me want to burn a crucifix or a church or something. Billy D.
Re: Provacation by J.B. Manning	3-Sep-03/9:26 AM
So I'm not the only one who thinks about ejaculation and masturbation and sex with androids (oops, that one slipped out), and is not afraid to admit it. I give it an 8 for its ample supply of rhymes.
Re: Sonnet for a Suicide by <~>	2-Sep-03/8:58 AM
This poem was so good it made me lose my pants. Where are they? Oh, there they are, around my ankles. Silly me. 10/10.
Re: great caesar's ghost by bondjedi	2-Sep-03/7:13 AM
i give it a 3 just because i hate the word bitch so much.
Re: One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined	2-Sep-03/7:11 AM
Who says 'tis? The concepts are good, but it's a little too eighteenth-century for me. 8/10.