poemranker ::20 most recent comments by impert&ent and replies

Comments byimpert&ent, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Ginger Cascade by impert&ent 4 Oct 2021, 4:05 PM
This is the first of the five.
Nothing else has been written yet.
on Bats by Dovina 21 Jul 2021, 9:56 AM
Shear numbers; they're in for a haircut, a scalping.
Shearing flight, slicing the air.
Shearing numbers: as immortalised by Kerouac.

And as always he leaned his blind head on his pale hand, all ears opened like the ears of an elephant, listening to the American sounds and mastering them for his own English summer's-night use. Then they urged him to get up and play. He did. He played innumerable choruses with amazing chords that mounted higher and higher till the sweat splashed all over the piano and everybody listened in awe and fright. They led him off the stand after an hour. He went back to his dark corner, old God Shearing, and the boys said, 'There ain't nothin left after that.

https://www.muziekweb.nl/en/Link/U00001105001/POPULAR/November-in-the-snow
on Jerusalem the Golden by rabbi sammy schtupp 10 Feb 2021, 5:21 AM
I like blesting fish to pisces. As for the rest of it, well, as Groucho Marx said on so many occasions...
on living stone by nentwined 10 Feb 2021, 5:18 AM
A bit of a riddle, but knowable...
on Days of Silence (1-196) by impert&ent 25 Nov 2020, 3:26 PM
This is my audience. I'm not sure there's ever been another. I have looked. And wished.

So the silence tells a story.
on Lovesick by impert&ent 20 Nov 2020, 2:40 PM
She's an icthyologist.
With a flick of the tale, she's off.
Fin
on I'll start by nentwined 15 Nov 2020, 10:40 AM
Crank up the old motor
replying on Due by impert&ent 12 Nov 2020, 1:11 AM
Chuffed! Am still debating with myself over the form.
Am just as glad that I'm not the only one stopping by.
on Where are all the poets? by nentwined 11 Nov 2020, 7:04 PM
Likewise, this is a beauty. A cadence, a repetition, with or without rhyme. Good timing!
on Days of Silence (197-392) by impert&ent 14 Jun 2020, 2:38 PM
Poemranker was silent between February 15, 2019 and March 13, 2020. We had nothing to say for 390 days. I have filled that gap with one-line poems to make 56 weekly stanzas. We are now whole again.
on Days of Silence (1-196) by impert&ent 14 Jun 2020, 7:28 AM
Poemranker was silent between February 15, 2019 and March 13, 2020. We had nothing to say for 390 days. I have filled that gap with one-line poems to make 56 weekly stanzas. We are now whole again.

This is the first 28 weeks.
on Everybody's Gone by impert&ent 10 Jun 2020, 5:25 PM
Poemranker you are still here
in spite of that lousy security exception
nearly two years after I last visited.

What is that about?
How do you manage?
Fucking ghost ship, wandering the highways,
playing sneak attack on the pilgrim tourists
Straddling the dusty road like some forlorn and has-been movie set
Cast off from the realities of TV and film production
Lonely ghost town ISO lonesome highway for romance and possible LTR.
on Embrace the Politics by impert&ent 26 Feb 2017, 5:38 PM
Stewart Stacy
on Celui by half.italian 26 Aug 2016, 8:09 AM
Celui? Ce lui? Anyhow, nice evocation of a once in a lifetime fuck.
on And on and on and on by nentwined 26 Aug 2016, 8:08 AM
Something a bit repetitive here, and title not evocative of the imagery
on Synchronicity by Prince of Void 24 Jan 2016, 7:57 AM
... alors
même que
on Deep Translation by T. Jonathron Remp 24 Jan 2016, 7:54 AM
Skating with the rays
Shellfishing suits trackwise trainers
replying on Playing The Vibes by impert&ent 21 Jan 2016, 6:37 PM
I reckon an answer is due. I was thinking about cannon, and smoke, and extending the metaphor from coiled rope to fumes. Sort of the opposite, also, where a rope falling to the sea floor would writhe around like smoke does in air.
on Taste Ghazni by eliastemplar 6 Jun 2008, 2:54 AM
in-sense?
on SMS by daniella 23 Apr 2006, 3:41 PM
That's just what I was thinking.