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6-Aug-03/8:28 PM |
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10... good poem.. realyy good
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| Re: He Looks Great In Lycra by GAY AS FU*K |
6-Aug-03/8:32 PM |
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I really don't know what lycra is but... 8
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6-Aug-03/8:35 PM |
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a donkey owned by a nymphomaniac... less grand but it works.. 10
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| Re: There can be only one by Shardik |
6-Aug-03/8:41 PM |
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quite confusing... but this is said in the point-of-view of a buffoon... 10
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| Re: letting off angry emotions by LosT SykoPath |
6-Aug-03/8:44 PM |
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7-Aug-03/12:49 AM |
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I do not know who proved triumphant in the end... but it is good story telling... 10
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| Re: Emotion Dawns by Nightmare-Poet |
7-Aug-03/12:52 AM |
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lot's o' good lines... though I do not see the coherence... maybe I am just dumb (and I am, mind you)... but I see hope... 9
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7-Aug-03/12:54 AM |
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"justed" or "just"?? Nice personification... 8
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| Re: Gaolbreak: Jade Marlboro by DreamerSupreme |
10-Aug-03/7:34 PM |
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Anything with the world marlboro in it is great.. the ruby ones does it for me though.. 9.. yup.. robots
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| Re: Sagadahoc to Hudson by http://mulberryfairy |
10-Aug-03/7:37 PM |
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| Re: How we found Jesus by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
10-Aug-03/8:00 PM |
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don't leave us hanging.. i want to find Jesus too.. 10
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| Re: Maine Freeze by http://mulberryfairy |
10-Aug-03/8:03 PM |
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loved it... very detailed description.. makes me want to see it too... 10
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| Re: Discomfort by FoulSanctity |
14-Aug-03/7:38 PM |
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How come men have more enjoyable bathroom experiences than women?? 9
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14-Aug-03/7:40 PM |
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| Re: paint brush by highnightmaregurl |
14-Aug-03/7:43 PM |
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you can do better than "you are my friend, pure as gold", otherwise, it is beautiful... 8
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| Re: summer heat blues by peaceseeker |
14-Aug-03/7:46 PM |
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| Re: Rearview mirrors by horus8 |
14-Aug-03/7:48 PM |
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nice reeking stench of rancor... 8
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14-Aug-03/7:54 PM |
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to this editted version.. 8
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| Re: *******Perfect***** by Mona Lisa |
14-Aug-03/8:02 PM |
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I don't know the technicalities of a Haiku... but it is a seductive concept you've put here... 10
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14-Aug-03/8:05 PM |
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love it... especially how you plit presentense... 10
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