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Discomfort (Free verse) by FoulSanctity
I sit down.
Discomfort at first,
However I soon find myself relieved.
Someone enters.
They sit next to me,
Though there is a wall that separates us.
There is silence
For several seconds.
I find myself unable to focus.
Suddenly:
"Ughhhhhhhh!"
The silence has been broken, and I smirk.
I return
To my own duties,
Pleased it was not I who interrupted.
My task
completed, I pull up my pants
And step out into the humidity.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6
Weighted score: 5.0715218
Overall Rank: 6554
Posted: August 12, 2003 12:32 AM PDT; Last modified: August 12, 2003 12:32 AM PDT
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