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Discomfort (Free verse) by FoulSanctity
I sit down. Discomfort at first, However I soon find myself relieved. Someone enters. They sit next to me, Though there is a wall that separates us. There is silence For several seconds. I find myself unable to focus. Suddenly: "Ughhhhhhhh!" The silence has been broken, and I smirk. I return To my own duties, Pleased it was not I who interrupted. My task completed, I pull up my pants And step out into the humidity.

Down the ladder: Naughty Word Game

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6
Weighted score: 5.0715218
Overall Rank: 6554
Posted: August 12, 2003 12:32 AM PDT; Last modified: August 12, 2003 12:32 AM PDT
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[8] http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.146.64 | 12-Aug-03/10:11 AM | Reply
That was good. I knew it was a bathroom at first, because of the word "relieve"- but then I thought maybe it was someone going to confession. I don't know if you did that on purpose, but confession/public restroom ambiguity works for me.
[9] Lifeboatman @ 202.78.97.13 | 14-Aug-03/7:38 PM | Reply
How come men have more enjoyable bathroom experiences than women?? 9
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