***Perfect*

by Mona Lisa

Member since 2003 · Posted 12 Aug 2003 · Edited 14 Aug 2003 · 5 comments

If I felt nothing, Then I would be so perfect, Yet never loved.

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[2] Dark Angle 14-Aug-03/3:45 AM Reply

well that all depends on what nothing is, some say nothing doesnt exist, but if it doesnt, what is it then, if it does, then its obviously something, so what the hell is up with all this crazy shit

[8] Caducus › Dark Angle 14-Aug-03/5:18 AM Reply

I think she means if we felt nothing everything would be perfect in a way because we coul feel no pain but we who would love someone who felt nothing? I get it.

[8] Nicholas Jones 14-Aug-03/3:47 AM Reply

This is a pretty, but essentially vapid haiku. Which the fate of most haiku writers, unfortunately. But it flows nicely and works well.

By the way, I've never been to Cirencester, but the name makes it sound a most beguiling place.

[10] Lifeboatman 14-Aug-03/8:02 PM Reply

I don't know the technicalities of a Haiku... but it is a seductive concept you've put here... 10

[6] Bachus 16-Nov-03/1:48 AM Reply

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