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*******Perfect***** (Haiku) by Mona Lisa

If I felt nothing, Then I would be so perfect, Yet never loved.

Lifeboatman 14-Aug-03/8:02 PM
I don't know the technicalities of a Haiku... but it is a seductive concept you've put here... 10




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