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*******Perfect***** (Haiku) by Mona Lisa

If I felt nothing, Then I would be so perfect, Yet never loved.

Nicholas Jones 14-Aug-03/3:47 AM
This is a pretty, but essentially vapid haiku. Which the fate of most haiku writers, unfortunately. But it flows nicely and works well.

By the way, I've never been to Cirencester, but the name makes it sound a most beguiling place.




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