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Nonentities (Haiku) by scitz Love, the idiom?
The space between pressed hands.
That point to no God.
Up the ladder:
One Night Stand
Down the ladder:
*******Perfect*****
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Posted: June 19, 2003 8:45 AM PDT; Last modified: June 20, 2003 1:40 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.7777777 Overall Rank: 1729 Comments:
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maffy @ 195.92.168.164
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19-Jun-03/3:35 PM
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Good
See, unfortunately the first line's still over by one, not that I give a pazow, but there are those that, well, you know.
so try saying "Love's idiom" in the posessive.
2nd line should have 7 for haiku? I heart line 1. 7
tada rata tada tadada tadada tadadda rata ta
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