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Haiku № 53413

Nonentities

by scitz

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 Jun 2003 · Edited 20 Jun 2003 · 4 comments

Love, the idiom? The space between pressed hands. That point to no God.

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4 comments

[n/a] maffy 19-Jun-03/3:35 PM Reply
Good
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos 19-Jun-03/4:08 PM Reply
See, unfortunately the first line's still over by one, not that I give a pazow, but there are those that, well, you know.


so try saying "Love's idiom" in the posessive.
[7] jessicazee 20-Jun-03/2:43 AM Reply
2nd line should have 7 for haiku? I heart line 1. 7
[9] horus8 20-Jun-03/10:20 AM Reply
tada rata tada tadada tadada tadadda rata ta