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Nonentities (Haiku) by scitz
Love, the idiom? The space between pressed hands. That point to no God.

Up the ladder: One Night Stand
Down the ladder: *******Perfect*****

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5555553
Weighted score: 5.7777777
Overall Rank: 1729
Posted: June 19, 2003 8:45 AM PDT; Last modified: June 20, 2003 1:40 AM PDT
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[n/a] maffy @ 195.92.168.164 | 19-Jun-03/3:35 PM | Reply
Good
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 19-Jun-03/4:08 PM | Reply
See, unfortunately the first line's still over by one, not that I give a pazow, but there are those that, well, you know.


so try saying "Love's idiom" in the posessive.
[7] jessicazee @ 205.188.209.7 | 20-Jun-03/2:43 AM | Reply
2nd line should have 7 for haiku? I heart line 1. 7
[9] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 20-Jun-03/10:20 AM | Reply
tada rata tada tadada tadada tadadda rata ta
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