| Re: Life's Great Irony by Tascobar |
11-Sep-02/12:41 PM |
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eh. not a limerick. I need to set up something to deal with these cases. If I want to look at limericks, I want to look at limericks...
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| Re: No other limericks? by gothwalk |
11-Sep-02/12:41 PM |
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| Re: Wise Clogg! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
11-Sep-02/12:42 PM |
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doesn't quite fit the form, but it's cute.
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| Re: AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
11-Sep-02/12:44 PM |
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when you read this, do you rhyme "glass" with "ass" with "Lass", or "glarz" with "arz" with "Larz", or...?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
11-Sep-02/12:44 PM |
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nice tribute poem, but no thanks.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
11-Sep-02/12:46 PM |
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"and so her did I" :rofl: (lol/asl/wtf!?)
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| Re: Cadbury Avenue by Takay Shitar |
11-Sep-02/12:47 PM |
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| Re: Jeff by OneFingerAnswer |
11-Sep-02/12:49 PM |
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| Re: What R U? by Sigh'ense... |
11-Sep-02/12:50 PM |
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a good last stanza. everything else read a bit awkwardly; I think I'd like it as just the last.
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| Re: Waiting for the Doctor by GAC |
11-Sep-02/12:53 PM |
decent if overly simplistic.
the "age-ins" doesn't seem to go with the rest of the poem's presentation.
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| Re: Ode to Poem Ranker by Lenore |
11-Sep-02/12:54 PM |
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aw, that's really sweet. :) shucks. :)
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| Re: Ethnic Smells by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
11-Sep-02/12:55 PM |
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Seus is always a favorite.
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| Re: La tasse de vie by keatsImnot |
11-Sep-02/12:56 PM |
short/naught?
why the allcaps?
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| Re: Seen from a train by aliena |
11-Sep-02/12:57 PM |
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a nice ending to the poem. I really didn't like "The Unknown Infinity". s2 and s3 felt to me like they could use some work.
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| Re: the rose by keatsImnot |
11-Sep-02/12:58 PM |
I hate roses. (suiters -> suitors).
a decent poem, though.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
11-Sep-02/12:59 PM |
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I read this once a long time ago. I like it, today. I don't think I did then. I must be in an oddly good mood.
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| Re: Cow Do by http://David Bowman |
11-Sep-02/1:00 PM |
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hilarious but wrong, oh so wrong. :)
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| Re: The ONE by Eline |
11-Sep-02/1:03 PM |
"beautiful" doesn't scan right. "And I stopped for none" doesn't scan right, either.
your ending, "because you are the ONE" really hurts the piece, I think.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
11-Sep-02/1:04 PM |
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DA and GW, kissing in a tree, s. i. t. t. i. n. g.!!!
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| Re: want it by sontei |
11-Sep-02/1:05 PM |
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"for every day of my life" doesn't scan right. and what's up with rhyming "arse" with "ass"?
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