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Jeff (Ode) by OneFingerAnswer
Hello world I`m the man no one knows I`m bleeding again It runs and flows No one sees me here But they scrub the stains They get rid of of the mess But the problem remains No bandage on my arm But sponges in in their hands They have an answer But not the one the crisis demands When I turn from person to body Just go on and take me away It doesn`t matter Who am I to ruin your day? I`m screaming in your face Yet you can`t hear You won`t or can`t listen Maybe next time I`ll try your ear No, I`m tired of yelling All the words that just go by I`m tired of talking When you can`t see me cry Now you see this But I`m not here If there`s a next time Love what you hold dear

Up the ladder: #3
Down the ladder: Litany of the Mullet

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.785714
Weighted score: 5.5744033
Overall Rank: 2378
Posted: July 30, 2002 4:46 PM PDT; Last modified: July 30, 2002 5:09 PM PDT
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Comments:
[7] razorgrin @ 142.166.105.202 | 9-Aug-02/12:29 PM | Reply
yours is more involved with the mental processes involved. I like this one.
[4] nentwined @ 192.168.0.69 | 11-Sep-02/12:49 PM | Reply
hmm?
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