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No other limericks? (Limerick) by gothwalk There was a young man from West Cork,
Who travelled to work on a fork.
When challenged for reasons,
Said, "I change with the seasons!
For winter, a knife has no torque."
Up the ladder:
To Hell With Dylan Thomas
Down the ladder:
That's What It's all about.
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.327586
Posted: May 10, 2002 6:29 AM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2002 6:29 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.327586 Overall Rank: 3502 Comments:
YAY
I really like this ... get the "faux" internal rhyme work-fork!!! slight disorder of metre on line 4 and a missing "he" but it's almost absolutely wonderful
Awesome voting!
cute. I like forks.
i like your usage of silverware
Excellent rhyme and meter!
This is a great limerick. The mixture of absurdity and rationality is pure, classic Lear. Anyone who doesn't think it works, because they're only used to dirty limericks, is an idiot.
:blink: whafuck? :)
hmph, mediocre
I like it
Forced. Unfunny.
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-s: awkward, confusing
+s: this works in a limerick...although it's hardly catchy. Try some sexual innuendo in the last line.