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La tasse de vie (Ode) by keatsImnot
THE CUP OF LIFE IS EVER FULL BUT PEOPLE THIRST THEIR LIVES SO DULL FOR ME TO TASTE THAT LIQUER FINE TO IMBIBE DEEP THAT SWEETEST WINE TO QUENCH MY THIRST TO QUELL THE FIRE IT IS MY JOY MY ONE DESIRE OUR LIFE FLIES FAST OUR TIME SO SHORT FOR MOST AMBITIONS COME TO NOUGHT WE LIKE TO DREAM BUT SELDOM TRY WE WATCH THAT CLOCK GO TICKING BY SO TAKE THAT CUP AND DRINK YOUR FILL WHILE YOU ARE YOUNG AND HEALTHY STILL IN YEARS TO COME TO SATISFY YOU'LL GRAB THAT CUP AND FIND IT DRY

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.888889
Weighted score: 4.9444447
Overall Rank: 9004
Posted: July 25, 2002 5:40 AM PDT; Last modified: July 25, 2002 5:40 AM PDT
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Comments:
[8] Amelia @ 198.146.142.174 | 25-Jul-02/8:06 AM | Reply
WoW! This is good!
[0] poetandknowit @ 65.101.212.157 | 13-Aug-02/9:17 AM | Reply
Keats you are not. Try again, this time w/o caps.
[5] limonade @ 198.164.250.97 | 13-Aug-02/11:23 AM | Reply
poetandknowit, lack of capitalisation doth not a poem make. This poem does well with a tired form and subject matter.
[6] nentwined @ 192.168.0.69 | 11-Sep-02/12:56 PM | Reply
short/naught?

why the allcaps?
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