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numbskull boomarang (Free verse) by skaskowski take all you've ever regarded as important
and roll it into a ball
then bowl with it.
If you get a strike, good for you
you threw the fucking thing away anyway
what, did you think this alley had an automatic ball return?
idiot.
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Posted: September 15, 2002 9:05 PM PDT; Last modified: September 15, 2002 9:05 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9444447 Overall Rank: 9006 Comments:
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decadentlaurel @ 24.80.254.207
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15-Sep-02/9:10 PM
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funny i dont know if it has any real significance? is it an allusion to gambling?
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skaskowski @ 206.69.163.59
> decadentlaurel
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15-Sep-02/9:21 PM
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it's more of an illusion of rambling.
in bowling and boomerang, the trust that the object cast away will return is implicit to the game. what jaded game are you at, skask?
i think i love this. especially the title! without "idiot" i might like it better. it already implies that.
i'm quite fond of your work, just not your moral insights. leave that for the chinese. great! moving on to the others.
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