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numbskull boomarang (Free verse) by skaskowski
take all you've ever regarded as important and roll it into a ball then bowl with it. If you get a strike, good for you you threw the fucking thing away anyway what, did you think this alley had an automatic ball return? idiot.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.888889
Weighted score: 4.9444447
Overall Rank: 9000
Posted: September 15, 2002 9:05 PM PDT; Last modified: September 15, 2002 9:05 PM PDT
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[6] decadentlaurel @ 24.80.254.207 | 15-Sep-02/9:10 PM | Reply
funny i dont know if it has any real significance? is it an allusion to gambling?
[n/a] skaskowski @ 206.69.163.59 > decadentlaurel | 15-Sep-02/9:21 PM | Reply
it's more of an illusion of rambling.
[5] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 16-Sep-02/7:32 AM | Reply
in bowling and boomerang, the trust that the object cast away will return is implicit to the game. what jaded game are you at, skask?
[6] deleted user @ 167.206.181.179 | 16-Sep-02/9:05 AM | Reply
i think i love this. especially the title! without "idiot" i might like it better. it already implies that.
[6] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 16-Sep-02/11:34 AM | Reply
i'm quite fond of your work, just not your moral insights. leave that for the chinese. great! moving on to the others.
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