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the rose (Ode) by keatsImnot
Oh shabby rose you loll your weary head
Two days you bloomed in earnest and stood proud
But now beauties gone your petals dead
Your blackening leaves hang limply as your shroud
For weeks the bees came calling to your bed
And kissed your virgin petals with desire
And with a maidens blush your cheeks shone red
Effulgent with intense etheral fire
But now your suiters call on you no more
Your perfume gone your pollen sucked and dry
And you are left alone bereft and poor
As I am left alone to wonder why.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0833335
Weighted score: 5.0609217
Overall Rank: 6657
Posted: July 23, 2002 3:52 AM PDT; Last modified: July 23, 2002 3:52 AM PDT
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a decent poem, though.