Re: a comment on Maman: Psychic Tophet by SupremeDreamer	24-Jun-03/4:19 PM
I understand why it should be compacted.. but could anyone give some suggestions as to what i should cut out.. staring at it i find it hard to choose.. it all has much meaning to me ;/
Re: a comment on Maman: Psychic Tophet by SupremeDreamer	24-Jun-03/4:07 PM
Ok, I'll look over it, thanks for pointing it out.
Re: a comment on A Gordian knot (Some dirt on a friend of mine) by Bachus	23-Jun-03/8:19 PM
Ahh, but I have, and they don't speak of being plagued by visionary states and emotional and mental torture and suffering to such degrees. Rarely have I met such people cept a few, and some other extremely disturbing examples such as your piece up there.. i dont see a common pattern..
Re: a comment on A Gordian knot (Some dirt on a friend of mine) by Bachus	23-Jun-03/7:19 PM
I speak and ponder, yet no answers to my statements and question.. i wonder, if im talking to a wall...
Re: Save Me by Freethinker1602	23-Jun-03/11:55 AM
yes lost soul we have the power to make it fall.. thats not special, the blessed have that too.. but we have the power to see beyond good and evil through the core of pure sinners suffering.. to make it fall yes, but its what we can create from the ashes that is true when it comes to foolish illusions such as power.. despite some imagination lacking in this poem, im going to bless it with an 8
Re: the nature of our stillborn by Crakyamuni	23-Jun-03/10:12 AM
simple, to the point.. could use more imagination.. ill save my vote in the hope that this sees an expansion and a rewrite
Re: a comment on A Gordian knot (Some dirt on a friend of mine) by Bachus	23-Jun-03/9:18 AM
Well, I know well enough your not Dark-Angel (cmon.. do i seem that thick to think that you are??) As for what you mentioned, your right about him, I already made my mind to simply ignore him like I would ignore some Christian convertist. I believe what you said of your past, but I was confused as to its intentions. As for boiling up Dhatura and shrooms .. ;) I won't bother doing a entheogenic listing of the shit I've ingested/smoked/snorted. Whats burning in my fucking mind is this comment from your knot: I won't even go into what happened when you dreamed your future because it's just too profound, but I will say it's the Disney land of dejavu. Also I don't know what decides 'chemically' on an internal level whether you astro projected and cruised unseen amongst the present, or whether you "future jumped". Deep in the insomnia that claimed me as a child I would have visions... see.. my mother who caused me and my father lots of suffering (another story) would go insane if she found me anywhere out of bed from when i was sent to it until 9 am or so... so I'd lay there.. staring, without a damned thought.. I'd drift as physical reality broke down.. mind you I didn't astro travel or future jump per se.. but I'd simply observe reality rewarping around me.. and what i saw once in one of these happenings is a chaotic time storm (what ive decided to call it). It looked like a tornado of technicolor dots at first... then the dots became something like telivision screens where i saw places, people, heard talking, screaming, thoughts.. it captured and hypnotized me.. i dont have much remembering of these vision states, but what i do remember is profound enough. I traveled it to the deepest center of its tormenting whirl and saw what i describe as a tree.. laying out perfectly before me I later figured out it was time itself.. i saw my future... and i didnt fucking like it.. so what did i do.. I CHANGED IT, Rearranged it and redreamed the fucking curse. But.. HOW THE FUCK DO YOU KNOW OF WHAT I DID LAYING TORMENTED WHEN FOUR? hrmm.. not even my closet friend, not even my blessed father knew of these things.. i sense though that my mother may have had a clue.. but you? you struck my attention at first with your clever comments on other poems i read, delved into your work and found an amazing collection. I usually sense these things more clearly than i did when i followed course twards this.. the whole time i discovered, joined, and posted on this sight, dejavu was more fucking intense than ever, and im wondering "what oh what father time lays before me that can be so profound as to prick my mind" first the ass-mask, it gave me some enlightenment.. but the knot.. was like an explosion.
Re: Playing Russian roulette with a tuna cassarole By JFK by horus8	23-Jun-03/8:39 AM
Ok man, i read them side by side and almost died.. you tried to kill me leaving my dead body with a disturbing grin!! how dare you commit such sin! fucking a, your a genius. from 8 to 10
Re: The Dry Wash by Kitch	23-Jun-03/8:04 AM
calming vision.. its like the sigh expressed after sex.. hmm what to bless you with.. ill give this a -6-
Re: Pilgrimage by Christof	23-Jun-03/7:59 AM
interesting, good imagery. ill bless thee with a -7-
Re: a comment on The Ode Of Clever Machine by SupremeDreamer	23-Jun-03/7:40 AM
he mentioned it and i checked it on webster.. webster didnt mind found it to be correct.. so it doesnt matter anyway. Im not american or british or a turkish monk in brown robes, and your pathetically just waiting and drooling for any opportunity to poke fun.. well, speak all you wish, after this comment i heed nothing of your foul cunt mouth. your politely, or "immaturedly" ignored Madam..
Re: a comment on The Ode Of Clever Machine by SupremeDreamer	23-Jun-03/7:16 AM
thanks for mentioning the typo. see what happens when people piss me off? ;D
Re: a comment on OM by SupremeDreamer	23-Jun-03/6:29 AM
No, i dont. Btw, can we communicate in some other means, perhaps the site chat or irc.. or do you have a suggestion?
Re: a comment on A Gordian knot (Some dirt on a friend of mine) by Bachus	23-Jun-03/6:25 AM
... im not sure if this was a joke, coincidence or if your just playing with me. any and either way, i doubt your going to make things easy.
Re: a comment on OM by SupremeDreamer	23-Jun-03/6:10 AM
Im very aware of why Donning an assmask was written.. the knot piece though is what really struck the dong in my magic mind and drove me to find a needle poking at my head tauntingly...
Re: A Gordian knot (Some dirt on a friend of mine) by Bachus	23-Jun-03/5:51 AM
Im.. not exactly sure how to answer as certain things mentioned act like a fucking mirror.. but this wont scare me, it only drives me insane into a task of getting to know you, wondering if perhaps that will be permitted.. You speak of seeing the future.. You speak of a boy that looks at a room and breaks it down into code (striking me with shock as i remember childhood memories) you strike at the core of my own name sir, suprisingly.. Now i understand.. yes, i do, for as i was signing up for this i had dejavu, i now remember the flash i had.. well man, with your potions you see into the void of what will be, but i wonder if you can see the whirlpools of time, chaos storms that have no cut clear result as to a persons fate. I see without magic potions (hope i didnt take a metaphore too seriously) I have only recently awakened from the chains of my soul and mind.. now i wonder what exactly you have in the name of dream to present to this mystics table..
Re: Hazy days by cleverdevice	23-Jun-03/4:22 AM
sad and beautifull song of love never realized only dreamed or so it seems.. -10-
Re: a comment on Donning an Ass Mask by horus8	23-Jun-03/12:29 AM
coulophobic? excuse my ignorance, but what exactly is that supposed to mean? Webster didnt have any definitions.
Re: a comment on OM by SupremeDreamer	22-Jun-03/10:33 PM
Dispense more gum into the angels mouth, so no one else suffers his whining screams. I'll buy you a teddy so you won't be lonely when that poor angel chokes.. we can end the war man, theres hope! Or we can simply let up and let the angel choke on the feces coming out his mouth and let him and the conquered lands rot into nothingness.. either way, we win, he loses.. ;)
Re: a comment on OM by SupremeDreamer	22-Jun-03/10:29 PM
Mmm yes, interesting it is.. now I learned that your a real clever one. Thanks for reminding me to question everything, seems your study is going well. ;)