| Re: Tommy, an opera in D minor, by Vagina the 3 legg'd pigeon by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
25-Jun-03/10:41 PM |
Oh, yes, I forgot something. Like i told dark, i did not just recently start. I recently started taking it seriously is all. Btw:
http://www.100free.com/rehash2888s/
(Nearly complete collection of written work, started when age 14 to now, age 17)
Heres more ammo captain. dissect some more.
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| Re: Tommy, an opera in D minor, by Vagina the 3 legg'd pigeon by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
25-Jun-03/10:25 PM |
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Ouch. One thing: Hermann Hesse, not Carl Jung. Though Carl Jung if i remember correctly did do some therapy for hermann.. Interesting overview, yes, indeed, quick and easy.. but I'm sorry for not providing more bullets.
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| Re: Being Queer (Lyric) by Twiggy by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
25-Jun-03/9:52 PM |
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Ok, here I crumble. But im going to stick to my opinion about the sister poem. If that means becoming the poetic punchline of the day, week, month (or however long that may be) then so be it.
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| Re: a comment on I fucked my sister (2 She's pregnant!) by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
25-Jun-03/9:16 PM |
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He is? oh.. as if this changes anything? answer: No. I still stand by my opinion.
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| Re: Bittersweet Emotions by buzzkilled |
25-Jun-03/4:01 AM |
hrmmm. you have a long road ahead, yes yes, just dont run out of gas, and make sure the engine sees a mechanic, perhaps oil change would improve performance
and why is the left blinker broken? -pulled over-
I bless it with 5
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| Re: Twenty Cigarette Burns Ago by DurtKL |
25-Jun-03/3:36 AM |
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Sad, yes it is when women do such things.
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| Re: TeEn PoEtRy ShOlD dIe by teenpoetryshoulddie |
25-Jun-03/3:33 AM |
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We would be in a world with alot less stupid things to laugh at... I think that would get a little boring. Ah well, not all teen poetry sucks.
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| Re: I fucked my sister (2 She's pregnant!) by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
25-Jun-03/3:28 AM |
what the fuck is this, rerun of poetic failure? miserable and without any taste.. humoristic? fuck no man, what the hell.. hillbilly poetry folks, welcome to the next millennium.
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| Re: a comment on Maman: Psychic Tophet by SupremeDreamer |
24-Jun-03/9:35 PM |
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lol. wtf.. ok whatever lol.
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| Re: a comment on Maman: Psychic Tophet by SupremeDreamer |
24-Jun-03/7:31 PM |
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In the process of chopping it into a series, I wonder if it would be a good idea to make it into 6 parts, with the messages to maman and papa as part 6.. any thoughts anyone?
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| Re: only pleasure left by richa |
24-Jun-03/6:50 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Maman: Psychic Tophet by SupremeDreamer |
24-Jun-03/6:33 PM |
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Good, so i hope theres not going to be anymore senseless arguements, and we can all get back to the art of imagination and language. ;)
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| Re: a comment on Maman: Psychic Tophet by SupremeDreamer |
24-Jun-03/6:11 PM |
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Ofcourse. I forgave my mother for her sins.. i can certainly get over past clashes.
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| Re: a comment on Maman: Psychic Tophet by SupremeDreamer |
24-Jun-03/5:59 PM |
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No, i wouldnt jump off a cliff if he told me to. But since i heeded his advice, i now have a title that was better than the last ones i had.. his advice did indeed point me in good directions. ;) Perhaps it just pisses you off that I heed his advise along with others and not yours?
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| Re: a comment on Maman: Psychic Tophet by SupremeDreamer |
24-Jun-03/5:57 PM |
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Nope. But his advice resulted in a title that is alot better than the others i had before it.. im quite satisfied. Maybe your pissed i didnt let you advise me of anything eh?
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| Re: a comment on Maman: Psychic Tophet by SupremeDreamer |
24-Jun-03/5:55 PM |
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Nah, i wouldn't. But he simply gave me advice, which in turn resulted in a new title which i actually like alot better than my former picks.. so hey, worked out well. ;) maybe your pissed that i didnt let you advise me of anything.. hrmm?
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| Re: a comment on Maman: Psychic Tophet by SupremeDreamer |
24-Jun-03/5:40 PM |
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I stick out out my tongue at you ;P
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| Re: a comment on Maman: Psychic Tophet by SupremeDreamer |
24-Jun-03/5:37 PM |
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Fixed up its presentation, and some other passages, stuck in the periods, etc. Currently in the process of chopping this sucker up into three parts, may be awhile untill im able to post them.. or ofcourse, i could sign up another name.. -shrug-
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| Re: a comment on Maman: Psychic Tophet by SupremeDreamer |
24-Jun-03/4:58 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Maman: Psychic Tophet by SupremeDreamer |
24-Jun-03/4:48 PM |
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Ok, i spell checked it, changed some things, ill look over it to fix those "..." its a bad habit of mine when i write. I'm usually in a trance when im writing so i dont catch on to it quickly. Ill think of making it a series.. sounds like a good idea.. and ill try to find a better title lol.. i never was good with titles.
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