poemranker ::20 most recent comments by SupremeDreamer (1261-1280) and replies

Comments bySupremeDreamer, 1261–1280 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Tommy, an opera in D minor, by Vagina the 3 legg'd pigeon by <{Baba^Yaga}> 25 Jun 2003, 10:41 PM
Oh, yes, I forgot something. Like i told dark, i did not just recently start. I recently started taking it seriously is all. Btw:

http://www.100free.com/rehash2888s/
(Nearly complete collection of written work, started when age 14 to now, age 17)

Heres more ammo captain. dissect some more.
on Tommy, an opera in D minor, by Vagina the 3 legg'd pigeon by <{Baba^Yaga}> 25 Jun 2003, 10:25 PM
Ouch. One thing: Hermann Hesse, not Carl Jung. Though Carl Jung if i remember correctly did do some therapy for hermann.. Interesting overview, yes, indeed, quick and easy.. but I'm sorry for not providing more bullets.
on Being Queer (Lyric) by Twiggy by <{Baba^Yaga}> 25 Jun 2003, 9:52 PM
Ok, here I crumble. But im going to stick to my opinion about the sister poem. If that means becoming the poetic punchline of the day, week, month (or however long that may be) then so be it.
replying on I fucked my sister (2 She's pregnant!) by <{Baba^Yaga}> 25 Jun 2003, 9:16 PM
He is? oh.. as if this changes anything? answer: No. I still stand by my opinion.
on Bittersweet Emotions by buzzkilled 25 Jun 2003, 4:01 AM
hrmmm. you have a long road ahead, yes yes, just dont run out of gas, and make sure the engine sees a mechanic, perhaps oil change would improve performance
and why is the left blinker broken? -pulled over-

I bless it with 5
on Twenty Cigarette Burns Ago by DurtKL 25 Jun 2003, 3:36 AM
Sad, yes it is when women do such things.
on TeEn PoEtRy ShOlD dIe by teenpoetryshoulddie 25 Jun 2003, 3:33 AM
We would be in a world with alot less stupid things to laugh at... I think that would get a little boring. Ah well, not all teen poetry sucks.
on I fucked my sister (2 She's pregnant!) by <{Baba^Yaga}> 25 Jun 2003, 3:28 AM
what the fuck is this, rerun of poetic failure? miserable and without any taste.. humoristic? fuck no man, what the hell.. hillbilly poetry folks, welcome to the next millennium.
replying on Maman: Psychic Tophet by SupremeDreamer 24 Jun 2003, 9:35 PM
lol. wtf.. ok whatever lol.
replying on Maman: Psychic Tophet by SupremeDreamer 24 Jun 2003, 7:31 PM
In the process of chopping it into a series, I wonder if it would be a good idea to make it into 6 parts, with the messages to maman and papa as part 6.. any thoughts anyone?
on only pleasure left by richa 24 Jun 2003, 6:50 PM
Indeed, beautiful work.
replying on Maman: Psychic Tophet by SupremeDreamer 24 Jun 2003, 6:33 PM
Good, so i hope theres not going to be anymore senseless arguements, and we can all get back to the art of imagination and language. ;)
replying on Maman: Psychic Tophet by SupremeDreamer 24 Jun 2003, 6:11 PM
Ofcourse. I forgave my mother for her sins.. i can certainly get over past clashes.
replying on Maman: Psychic Tophet by SupremeDreamer 24 Jun 2003, 5:59 PM
No, i wouldnt jump off a cliff if he told me to. But since i heeded his advice, i now have a title that was better than the last ones i had.. his advice did indeed point me in good directions. ;) Perhaps it just pisses you off that I heed his advise along with others and not yours?
replying on Maman: Psychic Tophet by SupremeDreamer 24 Jun 2003, 5:57 PM
Nope. But his advice resulted in a title that is alot better than the others i had before it.. im quite satisfied. Maybe your pissed i didnt let you advise me of anything eh?
replying on Maman: Psychic Tophet by SupremeDreamer 24 Jun 2003, 5:55 PM
Nah, i wouldn't. But he simply gave me advice, which in turn resulted in a new title which i actually like alot better than my former picks.. so hey, worked out well. ;) maybe your pissed that i didnt let you advise me of anything.. hrmm?
replying on Maman: Psychic Tophet by SupremeDreamer 24 Jun 2003, 5:40 PM
I stick out out my tongue at you ;P
replying on Maman: Psychic Tophet by SupremeDreamer 24 Jun 2003, 5:37 PM
Fixed up its presentation, and some other passages, stuck in the periods, etc. Currently in the process of chopping this sucker up into three parts, may be awhile untill im able to post them.. or ofcourse, i could sign up another name.. -shrug-
replying on Maman: Psychic Tophet by SupremeDreamer 24 Jun 2003, 4:58 PM
Title better now?
replying on Maman: Psychic Tophet by SupremeDreamer 24 Jun 2003, 4:48 PM
Ok, i spell checked it, changed some things, ill look over it to fix those "..." its a bad habit of mine when i write. I'm usually in a trance when im writing so i dont catch on to it quickly. Ill think of making it a series.. sounds like a good idea.. and ill try to find a better title lol.. i never was good with titles.