| Re: Cancer (Lyric) by Twiggy by Shardik |
26-Jun-03/9:15 PM |
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| Re: The Twenty-Fifth of Whenevber by OneFingerAnswer |
26-Jun-03/9:14 PM |
Whenevber? that could easy confuse a crowd if you ever plan to read this out loud.
"So why isn't going that easy?" -- Notice that this line sticks out like a thorn? fragmented..
-So why isn't it going that easy- just a suggestion anyway.
with those issues out of the way, i enjoyed this poem.
blessed with an 8
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| Re: i gotta sign by helpfulpoems |
26-Jun-03/9:05 PM |
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Teenage style.. yes, and your slogan should be "Preppy Boi"
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| Re: -=Dark_Angel_Is_No_Longer_Funny=- by wEdible Underpantsw |
26-Jun-03/9:03 PM |
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humm... umm. -shrug- is this commentry or poetry, because now i cant decide, it gets confusing..
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| Re: Friends? by Elvish Jade |
26-Jun-03/8:55 PM |
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| Re: At Peace by Elvish Jade |
26-Jun-03/8:52 PM |
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| Re: My Back Fat by charlie busted |
26-Jun-03/8:51 PM |
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Amusing and well presented.
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| Re: a comment on I fucked my sister (2 She's pregnant!) by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
26-Jun-03/8:49 PM |
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I can actually, without any real insistence. Maybe that is your twisted fantasy, ok, thats fine by me, but dont think erotic and tell me about to make me sick.. really. And what does that ear hear actually? the gurgle of me drinking large amounts of beer?
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| Re: a comment on Tommy, an opera in D minor, by Vagina the 3 legg'd pigeon by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
26-Jun-03/1:34 AM |
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OK, im confused, been up for 5 days now.. i think i had way too much meth, and im starting to become paranoid and schizophrenic... deranged thoughts going wild.. this isnt good. im going to sleep or something, spend long therapy sessions with Mary Jane and the Bong Tower made in honor of mary's serene grace.. and ill try to figure out the source of my mental malfunction.. reprogramming.. wheres my programmer.. wait FUCK, im the programmer.. great, this makes everything interesting, oh mary jane help me AAAAAAAHhHHHH
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| Re: a comment on I fucked my sister (2 She's pregnant!) by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
26-Jun-03/1:15 AM |
Calculate my fate, you will find me confused, unable to relate, but alas i continue this debate, watching you berate me.
Immature? ok, sure, whatever you say Gent, however you would like my words bent, out of place of original meaning, all the while the song bird is singing sheet sheet, mention breath and death yes, tasteless it is, for it can't be called shit.
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| Re: a comment on Tommy, an opera in D minor, by Vagina the 3 legg'd pigeon by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
26-Jun-03/1:08 AM |
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interesting and dreamy music.
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| Re: a comment on I fucked my sister (2 She's pregnant!) by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
26-Jun-03/12:50 AM |
Please remember folks: Look at commentry, re-look at poetry, then conclude your reaction.
And, O.K. I did give much praise to horus8. And No, I don't simply stand by it because of what you think it would mean, or what anyone thinks it would mean. Already people are thinking many things about me, I don't have the mental Processing Power to worry about it, or give a shit.
I don't like this poem, horus created or not. (Refer to Comment:
quote "99.9% brilliant")
I fucked my sister repeated is, as i said in another way earlier
the cries of the good hillbilly in trailor park 666. Tasteless.
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| Re: a comment on Tommy, an opera in D minor, by Vagina the 3 legg'd pigeon by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
26-Jun-03/12:41 AM |
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You have a sexual/emotional relationship with dark angel? disturbing, I suggest you sit down with Freud, perhaps Jung..
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| Re: a comment on Tommy, an opera in D minor, by Vagina the 3 legg'd pigeon by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
26-Jun-03/12:36 AM |
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Nice song. trashcan eyes. mmm.
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| Re: a comment on Tommy, an opera in D minor, by Vagina the 3 legg'd pigeon by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
26-Jun-03/12:20 AM |
Yesssss horus... clever snake.. whats this walnut you talk about?
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| Re: a comment on Tommy, an opera in D minor, by Vagina the 3 legg'd pigeon by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
26-Jun-03/12:01 AM |
crack open the truth? divinity? you think your games were clever.. yes yes, but what do you see ahead? walnuts cracking, or your voice squeeling from your owns nuts cracked? bleh.. no, who are you? this one or that one, dark angel, my mother or the holy ghost?
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| Re: a comment on Tommy, an opera in D minor, by Vagina the 3 legg'd pigeon by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
25-Jun-03/11:31 PM |
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-shrug- maybe im confused or self centered at the moment, but, whatever. as for the music.. if i wasnt stuck via 56k, i might download.. but no.
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| Re: Untitled by no1sangelz23 |
25-Jun-03/11:22 PM |
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| Re: Mistaken Battlefields by Brian Tiensvold |
25-Jun-03/11:20 PM |
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yes, multipersonality.. confusing and effective. lalala.
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| Re: a comment on I fucked my sister (2 She's pregnant!) by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
25-Jun-03/10:55 PM |
fallen in love? erm.. not exactly.. chisel out the diamond in my soul, ive already done that, more like chisel my poetic ability into a diamond. And yes sir, i am seventeen. Born september 1, 1985. anything else you may want to know?
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