Re: a comment on Obsidian Reflection by SupremeDreamer	1-Jul-03/5:57 PM
heh.. hey, i wonder if you would take the time to ask cleverdevice what happens when you bark repetetive messages? eh?
Re: a comment on Poetic Soup [revised] by SupremeDreamer	1-Jul-03/5:52 PM
Ah.. ok. nice Wanker scar...
Re: a comment on Poetic Soup [revised] by SupremeDreamer	1-Jul-03/5:51 PM
Your comment is absolutely priceless, so is your profile. Your great insightfull comment doesn't have enough balls or intelligence (i assume) to perhaps suggest ways on how it could be improved. Nor do you have the balls (i assume) to back up your statement by pointing out the problems with the poem. I don't know who has a more homosexual personality, the poem, DA, or you.. I think your the most blantant homosexual in this trio... Also, your obvious ignorance is startling, so is your arrogance, which is startling due to apparent retardation. Do yourself a favor: grab your knees in a gay club.
Re: a comment on Poetic Soup [revised] by SupremeDreamer	1-Jul-03/5:42 PM
a bit corner? i dont exactly understand what you mean, could you explain that statement?
Re: STIGMA / MUSEHEART by JoyLuck	30-Jun-03/2:49 PM
lmao. blessed with 10.
Re: a comment on Standing by the Sea by thepinkbunnyofdoom	30-Jun-03/2:34 PM
Retreat into old school and re discover notepad. its damn good. ;P
Re: a comment on Obsidian Reflection by SupremeDreamer	30-Jun-03/2:28 PM
lol. i dont know whether to be flattered or feel gratefull that i didnt get spun kicked into space. thanks. ;x
Re: a comment on -=Words_From_Dark_Angel=- by wEdible Underpantsw	30-Jun-03/2:00 PM
im bored, mentally and physically exhausted. plus i was hoping to awaken the dead and see some movement in the comment boards. success.
Re: a comment on -=Words_From_Dark_Angel=- by wEdible Underpantsw	30-Jun-03/12:59 PM
?? Me?
Re: Standing by the Sea by thepinkbunnyofdoom	30-Jun-03/12:57 PM
hrmm. interesting and perhaps funny.. but it lackes a certain spontaneous quality, because your title already layed out the end, or gave enough info for me to guess it. The final moral that you give for a conclusion, is a simple spurt of common sense. Then you attempted to make the last line catchy and funny.. but it ended up being boringly unamusing. I like the story you did spin out though, except for the insane "form" we have here.. your lines are running all over the place.. what purpose does that exactly serve? to make reading the work annoying enough as to drive people to become lazy and not read it?
Re: a comment on Ack Bassward, or something like that by thepinkbunnyofdoom	30-Jun-03/12:36 PM
Ah, well.. all these concepts so miraculously weaved into this poem just... doesnt strike me as imaginative or new.. old ideas written into a strange remix. Poetic story form? ah.. heh. one should perhaps question the purpose or usefullness of using such form for this poem? eh?
Re: a comment on Sage by DreamerSupreme	30-Jun-03/11:14 AM
Thanks for the well said explaination about emotional depth, I feel enlightened by it. About religion and religious teaching, have no worries, for I would only resort to using for example christian bible passages and would deftly twist and present a alternate interpretation. Also, philosophy and metaphysics is _not_ religion. It is indeed true that metaphysics is perhaps the central pillar to eastern thought. Hindu and Buddhist texts include some of the most pure and well concieved concepts of metaphysics. But there is a difference between respecting and using these religions to study the concepts and practicing the religion. My basic philosophical theory spawns from pantheistic shamanism, along with metaprogramming (the mental programing of the mind and how to re-program it) and theoretical use of psychoactive substances to help go beyond normal reality programing and thought. Theres alot more that can be listed, but I'm not going to get deep into this, less I be a rambling insect. As to the injected sense of me pondering the questions, its more like I wished to present an image of calm reflection. But I will try to make another that doesn't present that type of presentation for perhaps a more direct approach. About it not needing to be emotionless, your right, it doesn't require it. But if you look into eastern metaphysical writings, you will come across alot that considers the power that emotion has over people, and how it will vary from person to person, which in result starts to change the true meaning of the mystical text. I don't deny the possibility of presenting the mystical via emotion would be perhaps a more powerfull media that would better attract readers and thinkers. I simply have a slight preference in my opinion concerning how I see it. Perhaps I'll attempt writing a mystic poem with a deeper emotional tone as an interesting challenge. Again, thanks for your input, it did indeed make me think.
Re: a comment on A song I wrote for kristie played backwards by thepinkbunnyofdoom	30-Jun-03/9:52 AM
-chuckle- no, it isnt entirely lost on me. At the time i was half awake and scanning over poems while pondering a new poetic style for my work. While analyzing the poems, I forgot to try and figure out what the original song was, before making an opinion to your humoristic revision to it. In short: I wasn't all there upstairs. Don't worry, I notice the humor now, and it is indeed amusing. ;)
Re: a comment on Forsaken Faults by DeadtotheWorld	30-Jun-03/8:29 AM
ah, ok ok. I see. btw, i notice some sort of pattern with the first words of each line in your poem: The Not Not The Not He He To Then He I suggest thinking of better ways to start your lines.. and to avoid such dull repetition of these words. Dont feel bad, I'm working on not using the word I, so your not alone in learning how to be more creatively flexible with language.
Re: a comment on Sage by DreamerSupreme	30-Jun-03/8:11 AM
Emotional depth... ah well, ok, do me a favor and explain to me what you mean by that. Because, frankly it was not the poems mission to strike emotional feelings.. its mission was to induce philosophical/metaphysical thought. This usually doesn't require injecting the emotion potion into it, which might easily start to evolve the poems mission to induce thoughts of religion. The reason it seems machine written, is because eastern mystic writings hold to a code of apathetical presentation.. due to the belief that emotion at times tends to suffocate the meaning of the mystical piece. So it expresses emotion without delving into intense emotional expression. OK? no offense taken as to your opinion, i dont get pissed with advice or criticism. BUT i do feel that one should try to understand the point of the poem and think perhaps why the poet wrote it in a certain way. I do agree, the poem reads quite banal, but it has to do with what it talks about. Compare my OM poem and this one, and you just might be surprised to see a relation. Oh yeah, dont forget explaining this emotional depth thing of yours to me, so i understand what you mean when you mention it.
Re: a comment on Blind Walk Into Poem Ranker by DreamerSupreme	30-Jun-03/7:53 AM
Ah well, thanks. I plan to come out soon with a few more poems that deal with my failings and my thoughts of how to overcome them. Expect more amusing stuff to appear. ;)
Re: hurricane love by crwncka1	28-Jun-03/5:43 AM
Subject: cliche, I've seen thousands like it. 7
Re: shadows of love by crwncka1	28-Jun-03/5:38 AM
Well written indeed. Blessed with 8.
Re: On Someone's Dick by JoyLuck	28-Jun-03/12:45 AM
lmao. oki doki. blessed with 8.
Re: a comment on The Twenty-Fifth of Whenevber by OneFingerAnswer	28-Jun-03/12:40 AM
Happy to help anytime when possible. ;) Indeed, it is amazing how one little word changes a sentence remarkably.. the more I proceed with improving my skill, the more I notice that little things that I once considered irrelevant or unimportant are the secret keys to turn shit into gold. heh.