A song I wrote for kristie played backwards

Member since 2003 · Posted 29 Jun 2003 · 6 comments

Smash thy face I feel diseased But I've learned not to worry You'll see You will see You Most all he makes us see the disease If I only get one wish It would for what? Why must I see Its woe woe woe woe Emote Son know garbage Yes your there goes the only wasted son You know wasted son you need to stop getting into my stash Nirvana sux You know your supposed to be my heir only son You're supposed to be my heir wasted son MY HEIR Listen to films time old Hey Emo Son you know garbage Its near close behind You know I once was young You know there once was when living was as easyily behind ya Paining me and please don't hating your nieghbor You know I once was young You know I once

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[n/a] DreamerSupreme 29-Jun-03/11:40 PM Reply

um.. I suggest.. nevermind, im consumed with laziness.
Look over the poem, and notice the confusing result.

[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › DreamerSupreme 30-Jun-03/7:08 AM Reply

Um.. Uh.. I think the title explains its self. I didn't write it, More the way I sing a song I wrote for my girlfriend played in reverse wrote it, and I thought I'd share. I see it as trash but Its so funny to listen to, considering that this is one of those banal love songs that whiny teenage boys write, with simple words proclaiming I love her(take a moment to say ah.. how sweet and move on) and having it turn out like this? Played backwards my trivial love song becomes a song about a father scolding his son, for being a waste. Come on surely the humor in the ironing of this isn't lost apon you?

[n/a] SupremeDreamer › thepinkbunnyofdoom 30-Jun-03/9:52 AM Reply

-chuckle- no, it isnt entirely lost on me. At the time i was half awake and scanning over poems while pondering a new poetic style for my work. While analyzing the poems, I forgot to try and figure out what the original song was, before making an opinion to your humoristic revision to it. In short: I wasn't all there upstairs. Don't worry, I notice the humor now, and it is indeed amusing. ;)

[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › SupremeDreamer 30-Jun-03/10:47 AM Reply

The song is based loosely off of my Vilanelle called 'For Kristen'. It works better as a lyric but It took me too long to get it into Vilanelle format and I don't want to write another one cause those are defiantly a difficult style to write in.

[7] lunar 27-Jul-03/2:02 AM Reply

babe i cant belive u got dumped! what a stupid reason as well....hmm better picture this time tho! (u seem to have interesting red hair?!)

[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › lunar 27-Jul-03/9:42 PM Reply

Yeah, but that shit happens to me alot, and I'm still furious over it, but I'll manage. I just changed my hair again. Instead of a pink streak, I now have the front dyed blonde, while the rest is still just the same old dark brown I was born with.