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A song I wrote for kristie played backwards (Other) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

Smash thy face I feel diseased But I've learned not to worry You'll see You will see You Most all he makes us see the disease If I only get one wish It would for what? Why must I see Its woe woe woe woe Emote Son know garbage Yes your there goes the only wasted son You know wasted son you need to stop getting into my stash Nirvana sux You know your supposed to be my heir only son You're supposed to be my heir wasted son MY HEIR Listen to films time old Hey Emo Son you know garbage Its near close behind You know I once was young You know there once was when living was as easyily behind ya Paining me and please don't hating your nieghbor You know I once was young You know I once

thepinkbunnyofdoom 30-Jun-03/10:47 AM
The song is based loosely off of my Vilanelle called 'For Kristen'. It works better as a lyric but It took me too long to get it into Vilanelle format and I don't want to write another one cause those are defiantly a difficult style to write in.




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