| Re: Wigging out by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
22-Jun-03/9:56 PM |
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| Re: Playing Russian roulette with a tuna cassarole By JFK by horus8 |
22-Jun-03/9:45 PM |
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Extremely amusing, I started to cry when I found it hard to stop laughing. Slightly confusing though, or maybe thats just me. blesed with an 8, go in peace.
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| Re: Operation Candy Apple Tango by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
22-Jun-03/9:22 PM |
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Reminds me of battles ive fought.. yes.. the scars still hurt. I give it a 7, good imagery and expression, but it could use a little more imagination I think.
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| Re: Donning an Ass Mask by horus8 |
22-Jun-03/9:18 PM |
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I found much enjoyment with this poem, great work. ;)
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| Re: a comment on OM by SupremeDreamer |
22-Jun-03/8:08 AM |
Pray then to that invisible one in the sky :)
And I will rejoice that Everythinng is One the energy of life interconnected in everything that is and will be. ;) I pray to nothing, but simply have awakened from illusion, but i pity YOU brother for needing that crutch. wake up and realize the divinity within that goes without. ;)
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| Re: a comment on OM by SupremeDreamer |
22-Jun-03/7:22 AM |
clumsy mask? you think im arguing because i care? you truelly must be a poor idiot... tsk tsk.. let me explain:
your the early morning entertainment... ;) Also, what is this so called standard of being mature? Being subtly malicious? Your very amusing. Face it, your just a silly pathetic man filled with his own pathetic setups of arguements well clothed in authorative "maturity". Its just another form of starting shit, cept the difference is that I have balls to express my opinion without the candy coating. (but wait, you want me to me Mr goodboy right and feel blessed to have you "guide me..) Yeah, I know the same old shit, seen it all over the place, and its only the rebels that get more interesting and have much more diverse personalities.. but you guys still keep the good ole "I pray to jesus and confess my sins" routine. Instead of atonement, your cleansed with these nice awards to encourage us not to get in the way of your facist thought process.. we should "appreciate" it.. just like the christian tells me I need to accept jesus into my heart. *fart* ahhh.. simple delicate release of waste...
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| Re: a comment on OM by SupremeDreamer |
22-Jun-03/4:41 AM |
Look, the fact that you pointed out an incorrectly spelled word doesn't bother me in the least bit, im not so insecure that it upsets my emotions. Obviously no arguement arose with the "rogue" horus8 when he pointed it out to me, true the spelling he gave was also incorrect, but the man was simply following poetic tradition and was drunk.
You come out of no where first making a big questionare over what I "fixed" simply to ridicule me, then make this large statement how mispellings aren't a joke, blah blah blah.
What are you man? A robot who never makes mistakes? what pathetic creature holds value to some pathetic "maturity award" to bring pride and a boost to his ego.
I don't know horus8 much, but from his work (which is 99.9% amazing) and his attitude compared to yours, he should be given your preciouse award of maturity, for he actually has character and personality, and lets not forget, a very strong sense of humor.
So while you move in like some vultcher to make me bow down to your fragile glory, the "rogues" are making sure art still has its true roots.. your kind is the disgrace to poetry and art.
Its quite sad really, I mention to you of possibly providing more constructive criticism for my poem, and you blab about maturity awards.. congradulations, your the perfect VIP for the next bloated company. ;)
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| Re: a comment on OM by SupremeDreamer |
22-Jun-03/4:16 AM |
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ahh, yes. ok, well other than spelling, mind you ONE word.. would you like to add anything else we can consider constructive oh buddy pal to my eastern mystic poem? hrmm..?
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| Re: a comment on OM by SupremeDreamer |
22-Jun-03/4:13 AM |
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I see, attempts to ridicule me have been cut quite short.. now i go back to pondering the absolutes along with a bong, notepad, and a glass of wine, pen in hand ready to write the next line.
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| Re: a comment on OM by SupremeDreamer |
22-Jun-03/3:56 AM |
Many questions yes, and I will answer it:
Fools with masks become blinded and fall to disgust and regret
So now they must fret
And decide who to blame...
But aren't they still just blind fools all the same?
Blind still, yes, for now they see black and white, but hey..
man.. WHERES THE GRAY?
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| Re: a comment on OM by SupremeDreamer |
22-Jun-03/3:54 AM |
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I appreciate your help in perfecting my spelling good friend, but with the condescending tone of the criticism, hey, what can I say, I bite back. It doesn't mean I don't take it seriously.
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| Re: a comment on OM by SupremeDreamer |
22-Jun-03/3:43 AM |
color is irrelevant, for every person has a different set of colors to represent themselves. So, it can damn well be blue mixed with shitty brown for all i can guess.
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| Re: a comment on OM by SupremeDreamer |
22-Jun-03/3:41 AM |
Learn? ah, yes, learn, i will learn to double check other peoples spelling, and ill call up a publishing company and ask to be the next top editor, so i can get right down to the core of not letting writers commit sin with the pen... oh how they shall fear the possibility of not dotting the I when im done with them. =P
All in good humor no? :)
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| Re: a comment on OM by SupremeDreamer |
22-Jun-03/3:31 AM |
most wear masks (aka false ego) to deal with all the wonderfull insecurities people have with themselves and insecurities with how the world will/might percieve them in the lil squishy globe called earth i hold in my hand.
yes captain, i keep the faith, but the question is:
does that make me enlightened, or just another fool worshiping dead scrolls?
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| Re: a comment on OM by SupremeDreamer |
22-Jun-03/3:24 AM |
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Aww damn you, ;/ now its fixed. I've been wired for a few days, the mental machine isnt at full power captain, call my union lawyer perhaps in court we can settle it. =P
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| Re: a comment on OM by SupremeDreamer |
22-Jun-03/3:16 AM |
horus8:Transperancy actually, no offense, just helping your copyrighted material along.
--I had Transperancy mispelled, its been fixed
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| Re: a comment on OM by SupremeDreamer |
22-Jun-03/3:09 AM |
spelling mistake from earlier.
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| Re: a comment on Angels Struggle by SupremeDreamer |
22-Jun-03/12:54 AM |
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Lmao. Is there something you have against me?
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| Re: a comment on OM by SupremeDreamer |
22-Jun-03/12:51 AM |
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