on :: chameleon by elementalidad
5 Sep 2008, 6:08 PM
Observant Nature. Classic execution. Nine.
on :: snowsounds by elementalidad
5 Sep 2008, 6:08 PM
...Why is it I have this feeling that I've read something very close to this before?... -shrug-
on Coffee or Love by Nepanthe
5 Sep 2008, 6:13 PM
The coffee, or love? Is that what you're refering to when asking "Is it poison, is it remedy?"
on enter, do. let up, let loose. by FreeFormFixation
21 Aug 2008, 9:08 PM
Clever.. though the elephant bit befuddled me slightly.
Blessed with eight.
Blessed with eight.
on Are your eyes by hobojo
21 Aug 2008, 9:10 PM
The symplistic rhyme is why I give a six rather than a seven.
on 5 minute poem: section by Bill Z Bub
21 Aug 2008, 9:07 PM
It is good to see you posting again, its good to see some new work from the old guard.
Blessed with nine.
Blessed with nine.
on Suicide Note(Broken Down) by alvinb
5 Sep 2008, 6:46 PM
I have a better exit stategy.
on Gadgets and Poems by Dovina
5 Sep 2008, 6:17 PM
You're much better at executing prose peices... I think you should consider writing short stories, in a prosey fashion. I say nine; but since this far outweighs all of your previous posts in my opinion, I'll bless you with a ten.
on some deleted poem
5 Sep 2008, 5:59 PM
Bene mon ami.
You'd have a wonderful career with the Hallmark card company. If you intended originality and style, you failed. This is a replicated cliche, not a poem. I understand the sentiments intended, so I'll be nice and give this a three... 'cept we both know that a zero would be the blessing otherwise.
I can feel myself starting to get weak,
carrion birds need blood on their beaks.
I can feel myself starting to get weak,
carrion birds need blood on their beaks.
on SWF seeks SWM by Bethy
5 Sep 2008, 6:05 PM
Nice work. I'm sorry that there wasn't a good man there willing to give you that sexual healing- better luck next time.
Blessed with eight.
Blessed with eight.
on :: a stroll by elementalidad
5 Sep 2008, 6:06 PM
um... no.
on :: wandering by elementalidad
5 Sep 2008, 6:07 PM
Much better.
on Equestrian Dreams by Kamikaze
30 Jul 2008, 6:46 AM
Cmon dood, Mr Ed wasn't equal to beef products, why did you have to devour him and curse yourself with Horse Madness?
Thank god you got off the aba rhyme addiction. Nine.
Thank god you got off the aba rhyme addiction. Nine.
on A List of Names That Should SHUT UP by Tyler J. Mancini
30 Jul 2008, 6:31 AM
... Man this reeks of unoriginality. How can I even be moved to parody your pieces? As an enemy, you are no where near formidable.
on Come Winter, I say! by T. Jonathron Remp
29 Jul 2008, 8:09 PM
You know, you have your little moments where I start to get that tingle that signals that you've done good, and then you stumble on your face, get up, give me the tingle again, and again stumble. At the end of the piece you broke both your legs. Calcium gets brittle and the soul gets bitter during winter, eh?
Six.
Six.
on I Got Mine Designed by Skamper
9 Jul 2008, 10:58 PM
Sexual yearning and defrosted penis frozen in mastubatory rigor mortis... But people hate to much. Really. Simplistic expression is cool.. but sometimes the reader is left wanting more.
Blessed with a seven.
Blessed with a seven.
on Killer Gap by T. Jonathron Remp
9 Jul 2008, 11:08 PM
Procreation meets capitalism.
BEHOLD THE AMERICAN DREAM MY FELLOWS!
Behold the price of gas and the
penis based obsessions with guzzling hummers!!!
Behold the value of the soul
directly equated with the value of our dollar!!
Behold our children bred to work,
brought about by government approved
alcoholic adventures!!! Minds befuddled
during fetal formation, only to be
further augmented by piss poor education.
Amen.
GOD BLESS AMERICA!!
Seven.
BEHOLD THE AMERICAN DREAM MY FELLOWS!
Behold the price of gas and the
penis based obsessions with guzzling hummers!!!
Behold the value of the soul
directly equated with the value of our dollar!!
Behold our children bred to work,
brought about by government approved
alcoholic adventures!!! Minds befuddled
during fetal formation, only to be
further augmented by piss poor education.
Amen.
GOD BLESS AMERICA!!
Seven.
on Hardboiled Heart by T. Jonathron Remp
9 Jul 2008, 11:11 PM
Anybody care for a split heard omelette?
Six.
Six.
on Question by half.italian
9 Jul 2008, 11:15 PM
Life as lived is formed by actions whose roots derive directly from thought. Therefor reality is a state which is defined individually from the perspectives of various minds. We simply denote certain attributes to constitute an absolute factual "reality" because many folks share common delusions concerning specific attributes of "reality".