Re: I Got Mine Designed by Skamper	9-Jul-08/10:58 PM
Sexual yearning and defrosted penis frozen in mastubatory rigor mortis... But people hate to much. Really. Simplistic expression is cool.. but sometimes the reader is left wanting more. Blessed with a seven.
Re: Killer Gap by T. Jonathron Remp	9-Jul-08/11:08 PM
Procreation meets capitalism. BEHOLD THE AMERICAN DREAM MY FELLOWS! Behold the price of gas and the penis based obsessions with guzzling hummers!!! Behold the value of the soul directly equated with the value of our dollar!! Behold our children bred to work, brought about by government approved alcoholic adventures!!! Minds befuddled during fetal formation, only to be further augmented by piss poor education. Amen. GOD BLESS AMERICA!! Seven.
Re: Hardboiled Heart by T. Jonathron Remp	9-Jul-08/11:11 PM
Anybody care for a split heard omelette? Six.
Re: Question by half.italian	9-Jul-08/11:15 PM
Life as lived is formed by actions whose roots derive directly from thought. Therefor reality is a state which is defined individually from the perspectives of various minds. We simply denote certain attributes to constitute an absolute factual "reality" because many folks share common delusions concerning specific attributes of "reality".
Re: Come Winter, I say! by T. Jonathron Remp	29-Jul-08/8:09 PM
You know, you have your little moments where I start to get that tingle that signals that you've done good, and then you stumble on your face, get up, give me the tingle again, and again stumble. At the end of the piece you broke both your legs. Calcium gets brittle and the soul gets bitter during winter, eh? Six.
Re: A List of Names That Should SHUT UP by Tyler J. Mancini	30-Jul-08/6:31 AM
... Man this reeks of unoriginality. How can I even be moved to parody your pieces? As an enemy, you are no where near formidable.
Re: Equestrian Dreams by Kamikaze	30-Jul-08/6:46 AM
Cmon dood, Mr Ed wasn't equal to beef products, why did you have to devour him and curse yourself with Horse Madness? Thank god you got off the aba rhyme addiction. Nine.
Re: 5 minute poem: section by Bill Z Bub	21-Aug-08/9:07 PM
It is good to see you posting again, its good to see some new work from the old guard. Blessed with nine.
Re: enter, do. let up, let loose. by FreeFormFixation	21-Aug-08/9:08 PM
Clever.. though the elephant bit befuddled me slightly. Blessed with eight.
Re: Are your eyes by hobojo	21-Aug-08/9:10 PM
The symplistic rhyme is why I give a six rather than a seven.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Sep-08/5:59 PM
Bene mon ami.
Re: The KINGS by winniss	5-Sep-08/6:02 PM
You'd have a wonderful career with the Hallmark card company. If you intended originality and style, you failed. This is a replicated cliche, not a poem. I understand the sentiments intended, so I'll be nice and give this a three... 'cept we both know that a zero would be the blessing otherwise. I can feel myself starting to get weak, carrion birds need blood on their beaks.
Re: SWF seeks SWM by Bethy	5-Sep-08/6:05 PM
Nice work. I'm sorry that there wasn't a good man there willing to give you that sexual healing- better luck next time. Blessed with eight.
Re: :: a stroll by elementalidad	5-Sep-08/6:06 PM
um... no.
Re: :: wandering by elementalidad	5-Sep-08/6:07 PM
Much better.
Re: :: snowsounds by elementalidad	5-Sep-08/6:08 PM
...Why is it I have this feeling that I've read something very close to this before?... -shrug-
Re: :: chameleon by elementalidad	5-Sep-08/6:08 PM
Observant Nature. Classic execution. Nine.
Re: Coffee or Love by Nepanthe	5-Sep-08/6:13 PM
The coffee, or love? Is that what you're refering to when asking "Is it poison, is it remedy?"
Re: Gadgets and Poems by Dovina	5-Sep-08/6:17 PM
You're much better at executing prose peices... I think you should consider writing short stories, in a prosey fashion. I say nine; but since this far outweighs all of your previous posts in my opinion, I'll bless you with a ten.
Re: Suicide Note(Broken Down) by alvinb	5-Sep-08/6:46 PM
I have a better exit stategy.