Re: Women have Babies and Men Murder. by horus8	21-Aug-03/3:01 PM
ice scream.. nice, i love that. 10.
Re: Caffeinated Contemplations by J.B. Manning	21-Aug-03/3:32 PM
not a bad rant.. 8.
Re: When He's In Me by J.B. Manning	21-Aug-03/3:35 PM
Lightly slightly - pick one and move on.. please dont repeat the same thing twice for a sing line.. its redundant.. Not a bad erotic write.. but i think you could revise this to a much better output.. up to you anyway. blessed with 8.
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Aug-03/5:05 PM
evil doers? tsk, i dont agree that we are evil doers, nor do i think folks fear speaking against the 8, i sure dont when i feel the need to. ;) Title sucks.. overall though it was well written, i think its the best poem written against poemranker that ive seen. that deserves a 10.
Re: A Manifesto on Murder by Jeremi B. Handrinos	21-Aug-03/6:45 PM
hrmm. your right, theres lots of profit in murder. ok bastage, ill write a murder poem.. heres a nine
Re: fragile by Bill Z Bub	21-Aug-03/7:39 PM
hrmm. Interesting. 8
Re: Camera Obscura by Fear of Garbage	21-Aug-03/7:42 PM
hrmm.. an obsession with black oceans man?.. repetitive use of a word gets boring, fast. other than that, i liked it. blessed with 8
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Aug-03/10:44 PM
hrmm, joe, your evolving! by god! its a fuckin miracle. spell check like horus said, and consider how you might be able to make your imagery clearer, aswell as applying more focus on the topic your writing on. other than that joe, you got yourself an 8 from me, i hope to see revisions.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Aug-03/10:51 PM
boys only? cmon settle, i know you came out the closet concerning your homosexuality, but some of us still enjoy casual sex with women..
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Aug-03/10:53 PM
what was the point of resurrecting this? lol.
Re: The Angel at the arcade (this is actually an 'acne') by scitz	22-Aug-03/11:07 PM
thats one damn good pimple.. crappier than ever.. indeed, its acne.. 10!
Re: A Poet's Rifle by SupremeDreamer	22-Aug-03/11:56 PM
This is a remake of Deranged Sailor: Sea Sickness..
Re: Candle Lit Night by LuckyJoe	23-Aug-03/1:37 AM
ok, good, i like the first draft, but we must consider: GETTING RID OF THE CANDY COATED SUGAR FILLING!!!.. lots of shit here is not needed. Hear it sing, <--- this was filler.. closer <--- inserted just to sound cool? bad bad bad!!! This [dark] night {everything} [existing] feels right. [Allowing it to concur…] {} means: it might be better to get rid of it. [] means: TRASH IT!! man, the way im going, your poem will be a tap dancin midget!!! night is always dark bozo, ive been out of my house during the evenins ya know@! [Allowing it to concur…] wtf? stop being fancy, if your going to be, atleast do it right!!! i think you get my overall message.. i hope..
Re: Candle Lit Night by LuckyJoe	23-Aug-03/1:41 AM
no reason to fight the darkness - how do you propose to do this? i know!!! A FLASHLIGHT!! oooo i see two lover birds makin out!! quick, lars get the camera will ya??? i want to capture this moment for eternity!!
Re: To My Grave by Bonehiss	23-Aug-03/2:20 AM
horus, you bastage, i know its you.
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Aug-03/12:37 PM
greek mythology.. never much cared for this kind of poetry.. oh well, one day i'll suddenly start enjoying it.
Re: On The Floor of the Hospital by Fear of Garbage	23-Aug-03/12:40 PM
the writing here was banal.. dull.. it felt dead.. was that the intention? 7
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Aug-03/7:07 PM
Blessed with 8.
Re: I'm Back! by wEdible Underpantsw	26-Aug-03/3:19 PM
sorry.. but your going to be owned.
Re: Picasso (Limericks) by TanHand	28-Aug-03/4:14 AM
Tanhand.. dont try to out do me in picasso poetry, i can get lengthy and zone into the soul of it.. or i think so.. what do you think? check out my two latest posts. i bless this with 9 btw.