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Free verse № 61932

A Poet's Rifle

Member since 2003 · Posted 22 Aug 2003 · 4 comments

Blood dribbles from the quill, the feather dyed sepia. A poet's tears dampen the paper as he flaps his wings and sings his soul into the snow of the artic blizzard. His voice lights the way for his mind to fly free. His verses warm the fingers that continue to move despite stiffness, to worship words. He was found dead, wearing a t-shirt that said: "You can take my pen, after you pry it from my cold dead fingers."

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[n/a] SupremeDreamer 22-Aug-03/11:56 PM Reply
This is a remake of Deranged Sailor: Sea Sickness..
[n/a] Fear of Garbage 23-Aug-03/11:47 AM Reply
must you always begin your poems this way?
it's arresting
[n/a] SupremeDreamer Fear of Garbage 23-Aug-03/12:28 PM Reply
what the fuck are you mumbling about? eh? start them in WHAT WAY? aye? how do you propose i start them hrmm??? eh??

if your going to gripe, dont make some goddamn worthless comment like that without explaining your bullshit. ok?
[8] Jill Stockinger 2-Jan-21/6:01 PM Reply
you have a quill in the first line, a pen at the end- I think it would help to have "pen" in the first and last stanzas.
arctic has two c's in it. Could have a capital a for Arctic, but does not have to. Cute reworking of the sentiment "I'll give you my guns when you pry them from my cold, dead hands"-