Re: Not Real by DeadtotheWorld	28-Aug-03/4:29 AM
Hrmm.. i like this poem, despite the slightly retarded "life sucks lets shoot somebody" Philosophy.. But.. i guess im a sucker for it. Heres some suggestions: Get out of the cliche, get into the soul bring me into the universe of hopelessness hate and revenge, trasport my mind into the head of the crazed and depraved, show me the world of men unsaved and without hope.. with that stated: I Want to take out everyone (gerunds are weak use of verbs, dont use them habitually) With bullets and this gun. Crazy, Psychotic is what they called it. But thats fine with me, because their dead. oh well, my opinion.. you can always tell me to go fuck myself and i wont be offended. lalala.. blessed with 7
Re: Saturn by david	28-Aug-03/4:41 AM
hrmm.. this is good.. just needs a bit of a tweak.. ill be brave, why not.. you can just shoot me if you think im suggesting something evil: Father bribes her with a yellow-white brooch (striped enamel, diamond, and ten glittery baguettes that dangle in a black velvet case.) She stretches up for the honey-pale token, to pin it onto her blouse, over a heart lit like a jack-o'-lantern. But Saturn lumbers off with its curio cloudbank, sky-tethers the icy shoal elsewhere, padding round an orbit just out of reach. ---- Not much changing.. just a lil touch up in presentation.. youll have to do any other spicing up yourself... i only do slight facelifts. Work on this, if you do it well ill give ya a nine.. for now, ill give you an 8.
Re: Mercury by david	28-Aug-03/4:44 AM
Nice work. 10.
Re: Open my bum Oh Lord (Museheart parody) By Jesus Niggerstein by Bachus	28-Aug-03/6:13 PM
ROTFLMAO ahahahahahahaahahaahahaa: My parrot is a real talker, and he loves the Southern Cross. He's a rebel. He's a General Lee. cut to- SOMEONE SHUT THAT FUCKING BIRD UP! the whole damned thing was a comedians masterpiece, but i saw this and started to cough, and howl with tears, laughter turning my face blue as i started to hear my voice doing a wonderfull imitation of this: "bwaaaaa horus wanna cracker? bwaaa horus want to shoot a nigger? bwaaaa horus want to drop a tab of acid? bwaaaa, i bite bitch, ill never stop chirpin" ONWARDS!!! NIGGERS ARE SLAVES!!! LONG LIVE THE CONFEDERACY!! KILL THOSE NIGGER-LOVIN YANKEES!! -gen lee storms onto the field with his jackass, holding his cock and singing the crocodile alabama blues- god, your a fucking hoot. 10! 10! 10!
Re: Wit and Eloquence by Lifeboatman	29-Aug-03/12:57 AM
I object to: the long space.. could have been slightly shorter.. that middle finger picture could have gotten more detail, you can call settle and ask his advice concerning creating images with notepad.. the fuckers pretty good at that. "insults and bad ascii art are not necessarily poems." jesus christ.. if thats the case, theres alot of guys that should be able to fly. that aside, what got you to make this? hrmm?
Re: Wit and Eloquence by Lifeboatman	29-Aug-03/12:58 AM
Oh yeah.. btw, it wasnt that funny because: its not something i havent seen done 1000000 ways from sunday. im not being an ass, im just saying, your not being that creative with this shit..
Re: Australian Red by <{Baba^Yaga}>	29-Aug-03/1:03 AM
but theres a 300 dollar wine bottle that delivered to me my money bag: because after nearly choking on a toenail, i sued the vineyard and recieved 2 mil. Now they require meticulous pedicures before any man, woman, child or monkey can set foot into the grape barrel. Blessed with 8.
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Aug-03/1:07 AM
SCIETNTOLIGISE - erm, wow.. thats a mouthful, mind telling me what it means? dictionary failed me.. you see, sometimes printed pages are not a holy saviour. Nice job. 8.5, rounded to 9.. i do want to know that word though, i gotta keep it on a post-it-note so i can remember to use it, keeping the detective busy is my number one priority!
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Aug-03/3:55 PM
Now you're probably going to claim that your rant was just another sarcastic post intended to thwart me. But it wasn't. hey is this a good time to tell you that i live in a cave and have a bookcollection which is actually just a large study hall i have used in planning your destruction? Its a conspiracy right darkie? Seriously, you must think i like boring myself to death, but no.. i need to enjoy some electrical source of energy.. if i were to be sarcastic, then id make things way too obviouse.. i was being cleverly subtle (yes, i can bullshit, but lets move on with life, -presses play on his tape player- if i need to explain alot of shit man, to you about why i did this and that blah blah blah, then your a hopeless case.. enjoy the radio waves.
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Aug-03/4:06 PM
"why are you so desperate to tell me which words came from the dictionary and which words you knew when you were 10?" hrmm?.. desperate? lmao. i simply had nothing better to do darkie.. really. Im the one posting long rants..aye? and whos the idiot that does the same? You. you became a monkey.. chimp see, chimp do, chimp hear growl, chimp need be king kong.. you do the work for me, i just add fuel to your retarded inferno. end of story. you shot yourself in the brains, have a nice life. you could of said all that in less, but, you see, i was on methamphetamines.. your just addicted to your gentlemans tea.. -shrug-.. im not even motivated to be passionate in my response.. being stoned and bored, im gonna go to sleep.. oh.. erm.. 4.. for being stupid enough to follow the leader. :)
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Aug-03/7:29 AM
oh.. well, ok, thats nice, really, how amazing.. you've wasted poetry space to shorten his long ranting.. -claps- is he paying you for this? ropey? hrmm..
Re: New Horizon by Kitch	30-Aug-03/8:14 AM
this was sposed to be a pimple right?
Re: New Horizon by Kitch	30-Aug-03/3:39 PM
ok, labeled correctly, your the pimple master!
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Aug-03/8:20 PM
... -shrug-. I GOT WINGS! :)
Re: Burning your desert down by Jeremi B. Handrinos	30-Aug-03/9:21 PM
hrmm.. heh. 9.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Sep-03/7:35 AM
Yes, indeed it is true, darkie, the man who once said he wished to uphold the good soul of the true gentleman, is no different than the ones who raped, the ones who shat themselves and blamed their butlers, and is the perfect image of the gentleman who is arrogant "as a gentleman should". Yes. He is a FRAUD. He is nothing, the least the jesus of the true and good code, but is descendant of the same "naughty" noble folk he claims to abhor. I mean business.. and i shall not be thrwarted, i am the one who shall speak of the rogues stone tablets which speak the truths of murder.. MURDER FUCKING MURDER. Horus, my time has come, give me my blade, and we shall kill a jew and eat his liver for my induction.
Re: goofy poem to prove I'm not morbid (Ode to an Onion) by greym0on	1-Sep-03/7:56 AM
I spit. I pop. I rot. I cause thee to cry, and soon the fumes of my evil peeled layers shall kill thee. i smell someone who hides behind the moon, i smell a goon that wants to play a game i love.. or perhaps i smell blood that has not been spilled yet.. shall this veggie taste thy blood.. shall it flow as a large watercourse, or drain via the carved delta? -sniff- my teeth ache for flesh..
Re: Untitled by greym0on	1-Sep-03/8:00 AM
not good.. tsk. skimming the surface.. DRIVE THE KNIFE DEEP YOU STOMACHLESS WHORE...
Re: Untitled II by greym0on	1-Sep-03/8:05 AM
you poke at things you have no insight into. you think you can jab at this? speaking of chaos, dreams, and poor therapy insight spouting the widely known: "mommy if i was loved i wouldnt be like this" Hah. wow. your rusty, and im very motivated. tsk. im also.. CRAZY! im such a bundle of emotions just waiting to burst! hahahaha.
Re: Part I: The Peach by http://mulberryfairy	1-Sep-03/9:58 AM
blessed with 8.