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Free verse № 62539

Mercury

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 Aug 2003 · 6 comments

Hobnobbing around the Mercurian noon, with only a thin whiskey-coloured veil to waylay it, the Sun must burn carte blanche in the sky, growing white-hot and even larger as the day grows, spitting, burgeoning and flaring out at the seams like an infrared sunfish, gravid with roe.

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6 comments

[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> 27-Aug-03/11:58 PM Reply
Ha Ha, there it is.
[n/a] Nicholas Jones 28-Aug-03/2:46 AM Reply
What does gravid mean?
[10] SupremeDreamer › Nicholas Jones 28-Aug-03/4:45 AM Reply
Gravid: (Adjective)

1: In an advanced stage of pregnancy

What, no dictionary? :)
[7] <~> › Nicholas Jones 28-Aug-03/7:12 AM Reply
www.dictionary.com

[10] SupremeDreamer 28-Aug-03/4:44 AM Reply
Nice work. 10.
[7] <~> 28-Aug-03/11:33 AM Reply
the repetition of Mercury in the title and the first line unnerves me.