regarding some deleted poem...	7-Jun-04/1:35 PM
Pretty funny, was a good read for me. Then again, these kinds of pieces always get my juices goin. You are blessed with nine.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Jun-04/1:37 PM
I wouldn't call it spectacular, but I wouldn't call it horrible either. It's a tad dull, in my opinion. You've been blessed with eight.
Re: A life unsure by sliver	7-Jun-04/1:40 PM
It had some good parts mostly, but theres a lot of wrinkles that weaken its effect. You've been blessed with seven.
Re: Hollywierd by INTRANSIT	7-Jun-04/1:44 PM
This reminds me of my odd rantings. It began pretty well, but the end wasn't very satisfactory for me. Felt and looked like you just tapered off after "Mr. President" You've been blessed with eight.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Jun-04/1:47 PM
Well, I like how its beginning to form so far, but since it's unfinished, I'm unable to give anything higher than an eight.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Jun-04/1:52 PM
Shin, I feel as if I've entered a bubble of vagueness despite the cliche familiarity of that line "eye: window to the soul." I'm left floating, face bewildered, scratchin my itchin dome. No Vote.
Re: Le Sommeil- Slumber by Sasha	7-Jun-04/1:59 PM
Is this translation something that you've actually written? 'Cause if so, the classic flare isn't doin jack for me really. And if you didn't write this yourself, then why do you post it's translation? Not here to feel as if I'm looking over literature assignments, but these translations have that effect 'pon me. That said, I'll be reserving my vote for now. Hope you don't take my comment badly- I can't help being an ass since it's a part of my bloated pride.
Re: paperclips by son of the moon	7-Jun-04/2:03 PM
Heh. Nice work, sounds like something I'd do while idling at my cubicle terminal. You've been blessed with nine.
Re: Decks of Cards (So Long to the City) by wilco	7-Jun-04/2:11 PM
Unfortunately, I don't like country.. but you've managed to earn my blessing of seven despite my bias. But really, I definately don't like country, it's a withering music style in my opinion, hangin by the thread of nostalgic hillbilly prom memories of Billy-Jake Roe snaking his hand underneath the skirt of his friends sister a year younger than he, but her bra's packed enough to let a lot of things slide with the aid of some potato gin.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Jun-04/3:05 PM
Fishin always seemed to me an excuse to idle lazily with some beer, a joint, and a couple sandwiches. Ones pole is subconciously held, with its lure floating to the side, tugged by the current; an image utilized as a commonly-accepted disguise. Oh, and just maybe you'll be able to irritate the girlie back home who wrinkles her nose at the sight of a bottom-feeder hangin from a rusted lure by askin her to cook it for supper. Anyway, its an eight to me, your style has changed a bit in this piece, or maybe thats just me bein delusional.
Re: To Orange by Lifeboatman	7-Jun-04/5:28 PM
Blessed with an eight. Go in peace.
Re: Writers' Block by wilco	7-Jun-04/5:38 PM
Heh. You should of put "ThinkDamnit" as the border.. would of been funnier to me anyway. But anyway, heres an eight sir.
Re: A life unsure by sliver	7-Jun-04/9:23 PM
Well, that earns a nine in my book. Nothings better than a nice good edit.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Jun-04/9:47 PM
Not bad. You've been blessed with eight.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Jun-04/6:52 PM
LMAO. 10.
Re: Bugs by INTRANSIT	10-Jun-04/6:56 PM
Your use of picasso instills in me the feeling of inadequacy. Take this blessing of ten and begone!!
Re: Of Painting by thepinkbunnyofdoom	10-Jun-04/7:01 PM
I like it. Loaded with attitude. Blessed with eight.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Jun-04/7:06 PM
Let me express what this poem feels like to me over-all: Limp. But it could be stiffened into something that penetrates, if you get what I mean? So take this blessing of five.
Re: The Ocean Prefers A Sunset by wilco	10-Jun-04/7:09 PM
Well.. you know, this doesn't look as if you put all the ability you have into this one.. if it were to be sung, I think it would come out lame. Theres the potential for this to be extended and improved though. In the mean time, I bless thee with five. Go in peace.
Re: Even manic dreamers must face Atropos by SupremeDreamer	10-Jun-04/7:45 PM
My writers block villanelle. Hope it isn't too whiny.