regarding some deleted poem...	7-Aug-02/7:37 PM
Jim Morrison meets JRR Tolkien
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Aug-02/4:31 PM
Zeppelinesque
Re: Lysander cried by bornagainpoet	20-Sep-02/11:53 PM
I doubt your parents are pleased. 2 thumbs down
Re: Frail Monsters/Wounded Souls by Wulf	20-Sep-02/11:55 PM
There are as many stanzas to your poem as there were in Jesus' lifetimes, 33. This poem is 33 stanzas too long.
Re: Russian Roulette by <~>	20-Sep-02/11:57 PM
I would change the title to "5 out of 6 Dentists" or something vague. Otherwise, good poem.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Sep-02/12:48 AM
Reminiscent of the Counting Crows
Re: Conversation with a Clock III by morffrom	26-Sep-02/4:24 PM
compact and clever
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Sep-02/4:26 PM
hope within the belly? you mean below the belly, i'm sure
Re: Life As a Boat by dougsoderstrom	26-Sep-02/4:27 PM
the ol' 9-3-1 haiku. of course!
Re: James Dean by horus8	30-Oct-02/9:13 PM
brilliant
Re: An Enchanting Vision of Beauty by dalva	30-Oct-02/9:13 PM
This is prose
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Oct-02/9:14 PM
the essence of the education system. a masterpiece!
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Dec-02/9:22 AM
It's like a kick in the teeth.
Re: one word by Blade	6-Dec-02/9:22 AM
hackneyed
Re: 9/11 by dougsoderstrom	6-Dec-02/9:28 AM
mawkish and trite. As substantial as a United Way commercial.
Re: my journey--or the beginning of... by blurryphotograph	4-Jan-03/8:29 PM
a Nike commercial meets The Hobbit
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Jan-03/8:31 PM
brilliant. i like how you really got booted rather than just making it up.
Re: From the Ashes of Descartes by Quarton	4-Jan-03/8:32 PM
more like from the ass of descartes
Re: Why Did God Do This To Me? by TripleHGurl	4-Jan-03/8:35 PM
mawkish and trite with creepy undertones of incest. I give it a ten!
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Mar-03/7:22 PM
very sexy! write more about your fantasies, by all means!