Re: Rewrite of a goof poem. by INTRANSIT	24-Dec-02/5:32 PM
i like the orignal better too. merry christmas to yoooo!
Re: The Coming Light by poetandknowit	23-Dec-02/9:23 PM
i know about the waiting for that light. if p&k is mr winter for the mountains, then i am mrs for clinging desperately to the shortening nights, until the land is greened. this is a poem about hope and despair, in the simplest of metaphors: light and dark.
Re: a comment on Skin, Bone, Flesh & Blood by scitz	23-Dec-02/9:04 PM
he said 'bone' a lot.
Re: Foreplay by INTRANSIT	23-Dec-02/8:16 AM
almost there...
Re: strange beds (1983) by Bill Z Bub	23-Dec-02/8:02 AM
like it
Re: Laughing all the way to the playground by w~* ATHENA *~w	23-Dec-02/7:22 AM
what exactly do you mean to do by posting others' work as your own? anyone who wanted to read this can go here: http://www.bibble.org/misc/thefish.html to read <i>Misc: The Fish</i> By Marianne Moore
Re: a comment on Skin, Bone, Flesh & Blood by scitz	23-Dec-02/6:19 AM
i think you need to imply that. she awoke the soul in you; she breathed fire into your being. the repeat has a lovely cadence to it, but you have left out the crux of it. be empty before and empty after--in words. see, i thought that was what you meant, but i could have thought anything. i wanted more clues. also, this line is confusing to me: And every good trait of me, did not wait for me, to represent it.
Re: Legend by ThoughtfulSoul	21-Dec-02/10:05 PM
nope. sorry. you were correct: your heart has been turned to the color of nightfall.
Re: Skin, Bone, Flesh & Blood by scitz	21-Dec-02/9:57 PM
um, weren't you already "skin, bone, flesh and blood"? or did i miss something?
Re: One by adrenalize	21-Dec-02/9:53 PM
yeah. good idea. make love not war. why can't we all just get along? buck up, little camper, every cloud has a silver lining. here, have one point for each unoriginal stanza.
Re: RMAED by deep-as-a-puddle	21-Dec-02/9:44 PM
although this sounds like a pleasant diversion, i'll pass.
Re: a comment on The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus	20-Dec-02/7:21 AM
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Re: a comment on Xmas gifts list by lunar	19-Dec-02/3:43 PM
do you watch porn, p&k? o\i mean, other than the tapes we made in delaware that time?
Re: a comment on Xmas gifts list by lunar	19-Dec-02/2:07 PM
pshaw!
Re: a comment on Xmas gifts list by lunar	19-Dec-02/2:05 PM
please, don't ever pigeonhole a person. i write from my observations. i think of stereotypes as hypotheses that need to be disproved. why would you ever assume a poet would accept a stereo type as fact? isn't writing poetry about breaking through the mundane? argh! i gotta go to the farm and take a hot tub. and then maybe some naked volleyball.
Re: a comment on UltraSound by UnityMitford	19-Dec-02/1:56 PM
he sent his dad the ultrasounds, and this was his reply.
Re: a comment on Xmas gifts list by lunar	19-Dec-02/1:49 PM
p.s. don't believe him when he tells you he plays naked volleyball. he never takes of that old-fashioned striped tanktop swimsuit of his, not even to shower!
Re: a comment on Xmas gifts list by lunar	19-Dec-02/1:47 PM
how long have you been on this site, lunar? go on, piss somebody off. watch overnight as you get loaded down with zeros. i saw it happen to p&k and it happened to me as well. i used to have 5 in the top 15, then my fanclub ousted me overnight. as for whether or not p&k is an ass, well, he is arrogant but honest. and a lot of people can't handle the truth, especially when it is delivered point blank with a sledge hammer and a vodka chaser. he's really an old softie, although he wouldn't want that let out. he looks like basil rathbone as sherlock holmes, in his tweeds, smoking his pipe, grading papers.... such a character! and horus wants to pummel him! oy!
Re: a comment on UltraSound by UnityMitford	19-Dec-02/1:01 PM
your email's broken. again.
Re: a comment on UltraSound by UnityMitford	19-Dec-02/11:27 AM
that sucks,h. i did not understand your comment. so sorry for the loss. i know you were so happy about the baby.