poemranker ::RMAED by deep-as-a-puddle

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Free verse № 31260

RMAED

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Dec 2002 · 3 comments

When your moon is baked, and your stars are dry, can you lie back, and watch the rock river run bye? So put your makeup on, and go into the forest, for the bears will not come by themselves. Do you believe in what lies in the sky? When your queen is fake, and the jelly wont wobble When theres a wall in your head, and a spring loose in your bed. Do you believe in what lies in the sky? So break the cycle with a carcenagenic vegetable and feel the funky beat rip through your head and bend down to pull the toes off your feet. Dont try to reach what lies in the sky, dont dream of how to fly. Move away from the waterfall of time and spraypaint your eyeballs, fill your ears, and rip out your tongue.

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[7] horus8 20-Dec-02/7:34 PM Reply
i would of ended with spray paint your eyeballs for maximum confusion diffusion. than later... save the tongue ripping for an oral sex transfusion. trust me, i'm stupid.
[9] lunar 21-Dec-02/1:31 PM Reply
wow this is sooooo randomm! love it! xx
[1] <~> 21-Dec-02/9:44 PM Reply
although this sounds like a pleasant diversion, i'll pass.