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20 most recent comments by <~> (421-440) and replies

Re: a comment on Feasting Ouroboros by <~> 24-Jul-03/12:07 PM
blood and satisfaction is the niche; there is no consummation, here--the metaphor is a distraction, yes--but i think that Bangladesh gives too much away, although i agree that i spelled it out, and weakened it. shit. i didn't save v2. did you?
Re: a comment on Feasting Ouroboros by <~> 24-Jul-03/12:02 PM
pop will eat itself. and so will i.
be consumed by my own desires.
Re: Christs Harlot by Don-Quixote 24-Jul-03/11:52 AM
harlot.
Re: a comment on Nude pictures of children at work by Shardik 23-Jul-03/11:06 PM
door #2, sirrah.

this is carol merrill in a micromini, with a trayload of canapes and champagne. who can get closest without going over?
Re: a comment on Feasting Ouroboros by <~> 23-Jul-03/10:59 PM
had you gone to the library, you might have answered your own question. instead you'll be freezing your balls off in siberia, with no red-morning tea.
Re: a comment on Feasting Ouroboros by <~> 23-Jul-03/10:58 PM
if woody had gone straight to the police, this would never have happened.

Re: a comment on Feasting Ouroboros by <~> 23-Jul-03/10:55 PM
spoken like one protected by cartouche. twig tea, please. not sugar, honey.

ha! if you google shen ring, the first hit is, "Now at Wal-Mart: Keepsake Fine Jewelry."

HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA!!
Re: Voluptuous, Blonde Bird-Woman by http://mulberryfairy 23-Jul-03/10:20 PM
watch for the, feathers, they get stuck in your teeth.
Re: a comment on Feasting Ouroboros by <~> 23-Jul-03/9:59 PM
you want to look for clues in context, pbd. you want to srretch your understanding, until your brain hurts. or you want to be an accountant. it's really up to you.
Re: a comment on Feasting Ouroboros by <~> 23-Jul-03/9:51 PM
okay, i sit corrected. but it will help you put all kinds of wrong meanings into it, once you understand the concept. thanks for playing along at home, pbd.
Re: A Student in Descent by EAger to Offend 23-Jul-03/9:29 PM
nice and lusty, mr eager.
i might change 11th grade to "seventeen", just because.
Re: a comment on Feasting Ouroboros by <~> 23-Jul-03/9:22 PM
pink bunny. you are maybe studying accounting? thanks for the complement, but if you don't know what it is, how can you know if it's "nice" or "interesting" or one of those other face-value words that people save for commenting on things they don't understand, but on't want to look like they're out of the loop on? ha. there's your first clue, col. mustard.
Re: a comment on knott's berry farm, jam & polaroids by <{Baba^Yaga}> 23-Jul-03/8:51 PM
mommas, don't letcher babies grow up to be poets.
don't let 'em pick guitars, and tolerate dumb fucks...
Re: Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8 23-Jul-03/6:04 PM
ah, the weak hand. that's the sort of thing that chicks do not think about. have a 9 day.
Re: a comment on Feasting Ouroboros by <~> 23-Jul-03/5:56 PM
yeah, i guess i knew that.
Re: a comment on Feasting Ouroboros by <~> 23-Jul-03/4:55 PM
you and i, and the devil inside.
watch for it to get better, much better, both the poem (rough draft) and the adulation. you know the screams will come. who'se to be the lucky band, and when? watch yourself--
you don't need the rope, you need the oxygen. whoever thought they would tie you?
Re: rainday by Bill Z Bub 16-Jul-03/8:43 PM
galumphingly good.
Re: Border towns & the runs by horus8 16-Jul-03/7:55 PM
bueno.
Re: a comment on rainday by Bill Z Bub 16-Jul-03/10:42 AM
but, so worth the effort.
Re: Scarecrow by horus8 15-Jul-03/9:11 PM
first verse--fuck.

rest, v.g.: 9, for the future.


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